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There is a desire, a deep desire to rest to wash off yesterday from the deepest corners of my mind. I want to fold my thoughts and keep them aside until they seem bearable, a little less heavier my spine has been drowning in the weight of them. I have forgotten what rising up feels like I have forgotten what the warmth of the light feels on my eyes. There is a deep desire to rest to sing a slow song to my mind and finally put it to sleep. -dhanashri

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Date: 3/13/2018 2:55:00 PM
I like this. Makes me want to know more!
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Date: 3/12/2018 10:13:00 PM
Nice expression..welcome to the world of poetrysoup
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Pradipta Roy Choudhury
Date: 3/12/2018 10:14:00 PM
Date: 3/2/2018 12:07:00 PM
Hi Dhanashri! Nice lines ".....a little less heavier...." speaking about the burden of thoughts and feelings.
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Date: 2/28/2018 12:59:00 PM
Hi Dhanashri Welcome to the soup with your excellent and meaningul verses
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Date: 2/25/2018 7:14:00 AM
heartfelt write. well done & welcome to the soup! looking to read more
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Date: 2/15/2018 11:51:00 AM
Impressive ink, I can feel it. Well done! xomo :)
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Dhanashri Sidhanty
Date: 2/17/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/15/2018 8:31:00 AM
A poem well written from deep within. Superbly emotional, Dhanashri.
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Dhanashri Sidhanty
Date: 2/17/2018 9:05:00 AM
thank you:)

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