Response To Potpourri
Staring at her hips, my tie flips
As a button drops through my neck--
What a mess; but she did confess
I was grinning sans ego’s flair!
For Nette Onclaud ,My Poetic Response
Qoute # 2 : ‘The burden of the self is lightened
with I laugh at myself.”
17th Jan 2016
Copyright © Noel Onat | Year Posted 2016
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