Noel Onat Poet Free verse

Response To Potpourri

Staring at her hips, my tie flips
As a button drops  through my neck--
What a mess; but she did confess
I was grinning sans ego’s flair!



For Nette Onclaud ,My Poetic Response
Qoute # 2 : ‘The burden of the self is lightened
with  I laugh at myself.”
17th Jan 2016

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Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2016 at 9:51 PM noel, Congrats on your POETIC RESPONSE win. Luv - Linda -

Kim Merryman January 26, 2016 at 11:31 AM Noel, congrats on your placement in the contest with this humorous write! Love, Kim

Paul Callus January 25, 2016 at 10:08 AM Top marks to you, Noel....I bet you had a big grin on your face when you wrote this:) Congratulations on a worthy win. // paul

Faye Gibson January 24, 2016 at 3:44 PM Well done and light hearted. Congratulations!

Balveen Cheema January 23, 2016 at 7:22 PM Congrats on your well deserved placement, Noel!

Skat A January 22, 2016 at 7:24 PM Noel, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT **

Nette Onclaud January 22, 2016 at 2:57 PM this was the only one that used quote 3 and you nailed it!..big congrats and thanks for being part of my contest,noel...huggs