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Response To Ilene's Tush

Though Sampson was known for his hair Delilah quite fancied him bare She thought he'd look cute Not quite so hirsute And shaved him where no one would dare Alas, when Mother Nature called The whole world seemed to be appalled With no hair to hide Sampson's bouncing pride His battering ram was blackballed

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Deb M

Date: 8/28/2022 6:05:00 PM

So clever and funny Rico! Debx

Valsa George

Date: 8/27/2022 8:35:00 PM

This is indeed so very ingenious, clever and funny.... ! Do you think one whole day on what you should write the next day or do they come so naturally? However, thanks for brightening our moods!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/28/2022 10:27:00 AM

I get most of my themes from watching the evening news, but this one was inspired by Ilene Bauer's poem, "Tush". Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2022 3:10:00 PM

I really liked these. And here I thought it was a poem on Ilene's assets!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/27/2022 7:21:00 PM

I was unable to distinguish between Ilene's poem and other assets because Soup does not permit the use of quotes in the title! Aloha!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/27/2022 2:07:00 PM

Who would have wished to be bald as a coot - When they were seen wearing their birthday suit - Delilah was mean - Shaving Samson clean - As hair was his defining attribute……….. Samson's hair gave him his strength in defence - But to Delilah it just didn't make sense - She cried every day - Till she got her way - And that led to Delilah's death sentence.. Belle

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/27/2022 7:25:00 PM

Women wield a mean razor, so I suppose Samson was just happy Delilah did not draw blood . . Enjoyed your poem! Aloha!