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Respecting the Universe

A listening sky overhead, hears whispers of our words, unsaid. And though, sometimes, we feel alone, that mere existance matters not, or that one life will be forgot, a chain links us to the unknown. A listening sky overhead, hears whispers of our words, unsaid. We are a part of earth and sky, as one with nature, when we die. And though, sometimes, we feel alone, a chain links us to the unknown. A listening sky overhead, hears whispers of our words, unsaid. ____________________________________________ For Dr. Ram's Contest: Sonnetino Rispetto "Respect" 10/20/14

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Date: 11/7/2014 7:42:00 PM
The most amazing thing about this poem is that you never hear the repeated lines. It flows like each line is new and never before used. What it says sounds like the truth to me. Congratulations on this superb write. Fav.
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Date: 11/6/2014 10:15:00 PM
simply amazing, the message is the most profound of all the poems here I have read on this list. BIG congrats on this one.
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Date: 11/6/2014 12:26:00 PM
Carrie, Carrie, this is wonderful! I am so glad it took top honors and that I didn't miss reading it. Big congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/6/2014 12:13:00 PM
so beautifully crafted many congrats on your win Carrie:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/6/2014 11:43:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your top win on your amazing poem! One of my favorite topics-the universe.."A listening sky overhead, hears whispers of our words, unsaid." Love it. Sandra
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Date: 11/6/2014 11:08:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie.
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Date: 11/6/2014 10:37:00 AM
Lovely, congrats on your win. I really like this form and you used it so well. BG
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Date: 11/6/2014 4:08:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 10/21/2014 1:50:00 PM
A very good take on my Sonnetina Rispetto, Carrie! I liked your poem! Thank you for entering the contest with Dr. Ram and writing with my form.:) GL in the contest! Hugs! xxxx D.
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Date: 10/20/2014 1:28:00 PM
Ah, this is so beautiful Carrie. I really enjoyed reading this.
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