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Resolutions Vii

A sponge,
I will take into my hands and dip it
into water.

For a while, I will let it soak
till
its thirst manages, finally, to quench
and then, with it,
all little things that have bothered me for years
with a single stroke, from my memory,
I would erase.

Things that in the past, 
have hindered my efforts to advance,
so 
from inaction's dungeons, my imprisoned mind to liberate
allowing it, with new energy, forward to move at  
an increasing pace
for
all my slumbering dreams, at last, to awake 
and 
the goals of my destiny I, eventually, to reach!








© Demetrios Trifiatis
    02 January 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 12:50 PM
- A new year with new goals ... I am sure that you will achieve your goals, my friend - Beautifully written ... topped with the beauty of nature :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Thank you so very much dearest, Anne-Lise for your precious visit and comment! Happy New Year! Hugs xxx
Callus Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 8:29 AM
One is never too old to make new resolutions, Demi! We all carry some type of useless baggage which hampers our productivity. Let's look ahead with with hope and faith. Regards // paul
Trifiatis Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 12:19 PM
My friend, Paul, as I have said to our friend,Julie, this poem is offered to those who are interesting in a piece of advice. My resolutions have to do with other kind of ...world! A little bit higher! hahaha. Happy New year !
Pandit Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 7:24 AM
A resolution to live by--your thoughts are enlightening my friend. Lovely flowers.
Trifiatis Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 7:29 AM
Thank you my dear friend, Vijay! Let us hope that this year we are going all to be healthy and...inspired! God bless everyone!
Cunningham Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 6:00 AM
It would be great if everyone cleared out the clutter and fllled their minds with that of love and peace. Happy New year Demetrios. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 6:43 AM
Yes, it would! Wouldn't it my friend, Tom? Thank you my friend! Let as hope we would have more love and peace in our world! Blessings!
DiMino Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Reminds me of wisdom I read years ago, but too often forget: "Eat not thine own heart". Great write, Demetrios!
Trifiatis Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 6:40 AM
Happy to know that my writing reminded you of such a wise saying my friend, Joe! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment! Happy New Year!
Achilles Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 1:39 AM
Are these your new years thoughts? I enjoyed reading it, thank you. Julie
Trifiatis Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 2:05 AM
They are thoughts for the younger than I to follow. I am too old for to be at this position! The message is: You wish to go ahead? Get rid of unproductive thoughts and feelings! Thank you my friend Julie! Happy New Year!
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