Resignation

Your silhouette lingers and I can’t forget your voice, the sensation of your touch stings like glass beneath my toes- I have triggers that relinquish the memories given without a choice, but I have always known how the sorrowful story goes. Your abandonment reminded me of days long ago, you surrendered me with such ease as you renounced my care- I lived in your world for so long I can’t remember your steady flow, but I always knew you’d think releasing me was quite fair. Your passivity lapsed into the mourning of lost moments, it was the death of a loved one that brought trouble to my intellect- But you held no compassion and I was left without deserved atonement, your rejection to my heartfelt needs left you without regret. Your meekness inside your soul gave me reasons to grieve, I am a disregarded waiver handed over as the wind sways into the trees- I never thought my broken heart would be the reason you’d leave, I’ll never understand how you ordered such a compliant decree. You renounced me as if I deserved to be tossed into the sea- I am nothing but a submission, your left over silent debris. Resignation Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron October 1, 2016

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Date: 10/12/2016 4:16:00 PM
Hi Laura. Congrats for your WIN with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 10/11/2016 6:54:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 10/5/2016 6:28:00 AM
Very deep line- "your left over silent debris" :) all the best in the contest:)
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Date: 10/1/2016 8:23:00 PM
Hi Laura, This is a good take on contest. You have penned "resignation" well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/1/2016 7:55:00 PM
Powerful write Laura....GL in the contest
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Date: 10/1/2016 1:33:00 PM
Laura, this truly resignation, love the entire write ~
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Date: 10/1/2016 12:54:00 PM
Intriguing writing style "I never thought my broken heart would be the reason you’d leave, I’ll never understand how you ordered such a compliant decree.", Louis.
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