Resignation

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Resignation forbearance today as elder minds bathe at noon eyes are passive while hands fold in acceptance of a quiet resignation 10/3/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2017 8:21:00 PM

I agree with Teddy. it's brilliant! Congrats on a well deserved win, Janis.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/9/2017 9:32:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/12/2016 4:15:00 PM

A brilliant tanka!!! Congrats Janis, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/12/2016 7:24:00 PM

Thanks, Teddy.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 10/11/2016 6:52:00 PM

Congratulations Janis on the placement of the contest.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/12/2016 7:25:00 PM

Great contest Nayda. Thanks.

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/4/2016 7:28:00 AM

Resignation making the tanka graceful ...

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/4/2016 8:22:00 PM

Thanks, Probir.