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Requiem For the Lovelorn

Supine, his fathomless eyes fixed 
     on clusters of grey clouds suspended above him.
       He's busy licking festering wounds of regret.
     She was special; a gem, a raging flame to him. 
            The quintessential "one that got away" 

         His endlessly gnawing demons made her run,
     and she never looked back. His punch-drunk heart
              now lies in ruins and can't quite decide
     how or what to feel. Each passing day, he weaves
     a thread of fond remembrance for his lost love.

               That gorgeous, ever-present smile
              that often rendered him breathless!
             Those searching emerald green eyes
           that pierced through the core of his soul!
  Oh, the long beautiful dark hair that obeys the wind!

          Their love story was once magically in bloom...
    then the petals fell and were washed away by a flood.
      Alas, all is now lost; night birds that used to tweet
  as they foxtrotted under the moonlight now fly in silence.
    Their flame of love flickered and dimmed in the breeze...

             and the hands of time can't be turned back. 
          Fond memories of togetherness are now tinged 
     with melancholy that refuses to dissipate. They are but
        barnacles he can't seem to scrape off. Gone forever... 
        a love he couldn't hold on to if he tried. Isn't it sad?

Submitted for...
Strand Choice H,Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest (Winner: Honorable Mention)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
03/16/2020

Writing Prompt - Ten Words Poetry Contest (winner: 3rd Place)
Sponsored by Dear Heart
Date written and submitted: 02/23/2020
Theme: Love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 3/11/2020 3:29:00 AM
the petals fell and were washed away by a flood.. Alas, all is now lost; night birds that used to tweet..Beautiful lines Edward..Congrats on your win..
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2020 12:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jenish:-)
Date: 3/10/2020 6:07:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem and thank you for taking part _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2020 12:34:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.
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