Requiem For America

America the beautiful, where are your friends?
They have left you to find some other ends;
You who once stood for all that was right,
Are now only seen as a fading light.

You once were the head but now are the tail,
For greatness you had has now grown pale;
Once on top now great is your fall,
The taste has turned as bitter as gall.

Your birth was filled with blessings received,
You never gave thanks and now are deceived;
By every measure your prestige was great,
But a new day has come and the hour is late.

Whence comes the money to fight every war,
In faraway lands you couldn't ignore;
But you had an interest to protect what was yours,
In spite of the fact your bedfellows were whores.

Now that they see your purse running dry,
They leave you, deceive you and you wonder why;
For fields are far greener in other places,
And smiles more friendly on foreign faces.

You never listened or heeded the call,
Now it is dreadful to watch as you fall;
You now stand naked who once were so fair,
Your sins exposed; your travesty bare.

Your pristine waters have turned to mud,
Your endless wars brought only shed blood;
Your boundless fields of golden grain,
Now withered away from lack of rain.

Internal rot and external blight,
Driven by pride to take your might;
The debts you owe that you now can't pay,
As you went perversely your stubborn way.

The storms and floods have washed away
Blessings and love you had yesterday;
What is left but greed and crime,
That follow your footsteps till the end of time.

You live in denial and can’t face the cost,
And now you reap the emptiness of loss;
The rest of your neighbours, who follow your quest,
Will find that they too will lose their rest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 4:11 PM
My goodness! You have painted a pretty bleak picture, but, unfortunately, a true one. Your rhetoric is well received and digested by this reader. Well done, Elizabeth!
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 4:51 PM
The main problem being we know who our friends are but we have a leader with his nose up the enemy's butt. Even got a special prayer day for them on the lawn while ignoring our own. We need to start taking care of those who stood by us. From the Kingston Trio "When will they ever learn? When will they EVER learn?"
Martin Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Elizabeth, I read this in response to your thoughts concerning "Where have you gone America?" In retrospect, I wrote and posted that poem perhaps a little too quickly and am already thinking about a re-write based on this and other thoughts of mine. In sum, this is another deeply touching, thought provoking piece written by none other than you, of course! Bravo and wish I had read this sooner. Thanks again for the email(s) also - lovely book & I'll write more later. All smiles, Terry
Fraser Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 4:19 PM
The most dangerous core in the USA, are your C.I.A. <*> What trouble they have caused since their deliberate inception. It beggars belief that they recruited ex SS Officers because their interrogation skills were second to none. Yet they condemn other countries with their Human Rights. Superb piece Elizabeth, your quite a writer, and I so enjoy. Pleased to read you :)
Clark Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 11:29 AM
This is a tough read but it is true. Great write.
Devonshire Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Wow! This is brilliant, Elizabeth. I don't know why we keep interfering in the affairs of other countries, but we have certainly made some enemies. If there's a disaster in another country, we always provide aid. After Hurricane Katrina, England, Australia and Canada were they only ones who helped us. Incredible poem and I agree with everything you say here. Love, Carolyn
Cooke Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 3:12 PM
well said , we english feel the same way. what a world we live in.
Moriarty Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 8:02 PM
Really sad, but, Elizabeth, really true..you wrote well describing a situation in this country that troubles so many of us...thank you for telling it like it is, luv, Rich
B Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 6:45 PM
So sad, but a lot of truth here. Let us not join the Romans in their silent tombs, pray. Powerful poem though, well done.
Johnson Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 3:31 PM
In the face of desperate dominion. We do our best to quell our opinion. The shades of darkness are hard to hide. Even the best of us lose our pride. Your shoulders broad, are sagging low. The weight of knowledge, you just don't know. The sky is falling, it's all so appalling. I swear I can hear Jesus calling. We take a breath and cast our sail. But those in need aren't the one's we bail. Yes, the greed is beyond control. All that's left, is to pray for your soul.
Devnath  Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Its a brave step to express feeling of patriotism. Nice writing. I love the World, America is a part of it. Just continuing with trade cycle, after depression booms come. America is America. bl
Hornschuch Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Elizabeth, thank you for the comments of my write "Ocean swells". I like this poem, no matter how dark it may seem. it rings of truth... I think this subject would make a wonderful contest-Michael H.
Williams Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 6:09 AM
hey Elizabeth, a fine poem, but am sure your country, like the phoenix will rise again, many thanks for your comments on my poems, David
Johnson Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 4:47 AM
Empires come an empires go, on the eternal page of time, Aussies want to see you rise, though ! no matter hard the climb... great poem babe, xo, Don
Onclaud Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 4:11 AM
ohhh, a poetic rant that makes me reflect.. fine use of powerful imagery, elizabeth, wow! :) huggs, nette
Sadberry Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 2:47 AM
===Smile, *^_^* “Very Profound & Powerful Poem Pointing Unto A Light of Hope, Should Eyes See & Ears Hear??? = Although, No Other Nation Ever In The History of This World *^_^* Has Lifted `The Immaculate One's` Name Any Higher Than America! == Ahhh, The Paradox, The Irony & The Riddle???” === My Love to You Always, Jasper * Ps. Smile, “God Bless America, &, All of Life!” ~
Sadberry Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 2:37 AM
Smile, *^_^* “I Learned Years Ago That Never, Ever, Could I or Would I, Place A Blanket of Judgment Over An Entire Segment or Society or Civilization Because of The Darkened Deeds of A Few Lurking Amid The Passing Shadows = My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Elizabeth *^_^* Tis Kind of As `Christ The King of Glory` Once Did Say & Says Today == `Greater, Is The Sin of Those Whom Led Me to You` *^_^*” === Cont}
Villanueva Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 12:23 AM
thanks for the comment...appreciated. . .*-* smile. . .a wonderful poem to share. . .enjoyed it. . .amazing write . . . *-* junjun
Martinez Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 12:02 AM
I really like the way this poem was written. Our struggling country needs help and this is a great way to express that need.
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