Repost..T'Was the Night After New Years.....(1:00 Am.2006)

A TRUE STORY.....(honest engine!!)  This is fine country living !!
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T'was the night after New Years, and all through the house
Not a creature was stirring, not even a mouse.
The stockings and tree stored away with a sigh
Finished the last drop of eggnog, and the last piece of pie
Ma in her kerchief, and Pa in his cap
Had just settled down for a long winter's nap
When the phone by the bedside made OH!  Such a clatter!!
That I woke in a daze, to see what was the matter!

Neighbor Dan on the phone....he needed some help!
I laughed when he told me, in spite of myself!
A cow's in his pool....so chubby and plump!!
He needed strong arms to help haul out that big rump!!
Rushing over,...to my wondering eyes should appear
There's Old Bessie in water right up to her ears!
The prancing and pawing of each little hoof,
Old Bessie was frightened....she had made a big goof!!

Friends ran to the rescue, and went straight to work...
Taking care that poor Bessie wouldn't get hurt.
They put heads together and laid out a plan,
Tied ropes 'round Old Bessie as fast as they can.
Then hooked to Dan's truck, and gave him a whistle
And up came Old Bessie like the down of a thistle!!
She shook from the cold like a bowlful of jelly,
So they patted and prodded, till she rolled on her belly.
Then off ran the cow, with relief and so merry,
Her cheeks a bit frozen, her nose like a cherry!

We were offered hot chocolate to warm up again,
Four o'clock in the morning, and was time to turn in!
Our neighbor called out, as we got out of sight
"Happy New Year and Thank You! And to all a good night!!"

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See?? Country living isn't as boring as people might think!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/4/2010 2:31:00 PM
I love this one :) I was raised in the country and we had a pet milk cow. Keep up the good work
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Date: 12/30/2009 12:12:00 PM
wow, this is very clever, how you took lines from the original verse and tied them into your country tale. Awesome job with this one. Luv,andrea ps. I have been here for hours. Finally, to lunch and something different. haha
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Date: 12/29/2009 2:36:00 PM
I am glad the animal was saved ... you know how to make me jealous, but always I am a country boy at heart. One love
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Date: 12/27/2009 5:06:00 PM
just rumpbunksus! Loved it! Light & Love
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Date: 12/27/2009 3:20:00 AM
Lovely story Carrie, Happy New Year to you when the time comes >> James
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Date: 12/27/2009 12:37:00 AM
Happy New to you as well Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words
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Date: 12/26/2009 3:57:00 PM
Oh! How great a story and you are sure a great story teller and all in perfect rhyming. Awesome read, Carrie! Thanks for sharing and happy new year 2010! Caroline.
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Date: 12/26/2009 1:24:00 PM
LOL wonderful write here, Carrie !! I am soooo jealous of your awesome experience ... smile ... I really get tired of concrete and would love just to touch a cow ... smile ... you put this together in record time and its just marvelous!!
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Date: 12/26/2009 1:13:00 PM
This is cute....I laughed.:D Love, Sara
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