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This is a parable how so many on the highway to death Following and fighting over material things Caught up in this world following the crowd We have Jesus on the other end with the self check out Have you found your bargain So many will camp out To get a present on a deal The lines will wrap around The outside doors When the door opens be careful For they stampede in trying to enter Many get injured if not fast or big enough Everyone will get there gifts They have been longing on Then it's time to check out And the lines are just as long For we have called all the Cashiers to the front and hired All that would work for seasonal help But the lines are just constantzc My friend over to far right side They have this new register With not many seeing it There is no waiting or lines over here The problem is you will have To check yourself out But this register is much different There will be one to turn on your light To let others know you have Now entered into a working progress Place your hatred through here And love will come through Scan your envy and giving you receive Keep working we ain't done yet For this has to be done through Each person that comes through this line Have any questions about any barcodes The answers for all are Placed under the light Only problem is if you choose this line Before you are able to go Through the door to receive your gift Your old self will have to remain in the store And the new creation and living being Shall have a chapparone That will open the door to everlasting life Love you all , If you are reading I will not give up on you. Love ya This is a parable my friends I do not fight the crowds Broad is the highway to death, few on the path to life

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Date: 4/7/2023 8:52:00 PM
Through the Black Friday frenzy to hoard things, you have brought in a lofty message... the one who chooses a different line, will have to leave his old self behind and get into a new creation. Such wisdom and grace are there in your verse, dear Stephan! May God bless you !
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Stephan McBride
Date: 4/8/2023 1:07:00 PM
All glory to God, my dear friend, Enter ye in at the strait gate: for wide is the gate, and broad is the way, that leadeth to destruction, and many there be which go in thereat: because strait is the gate, and narrow is the way, which leadeth unto life, and few there be that find it. Matthew 7:13?-?14 KJV May God bless, comfort guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance: )
Date: 12/21/2022 12:14:00 PM
Stephan, wonderful write. I am not one to stand in lines for anything ever. I have come to the enlightenment that material things are meaningless, we cannot take them with us to the other side. But, I do love my stuff even if a $1.00 thrift store treasure, lol, blessings
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Stephan McBride
Date: 12/21/2022 2:14:00 PM
LOL that's hilarious, yeah me to , yeah I definitely once was in that crowded line not knowing until they came up with that check your self out register, then God revealed to me I needed to allow Him to work on me : )

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