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My apologies for reposting this. First poem I've wrote. Though this has been rewritten over the years again and again. 

Special Thanks To My EX

Lines 35 words 374 Version 1 To my unfaithful beloved lover, my unfaithful spurned lover I’ve been placed in the heat of love's passion gone Betrayed since love's first kiss perceiving you were my heart’s desire Always begging me to come over, yearning to hold my hand I’m not taking this anymore, I’m the one to blame From the heavens above, and the earth beneath My soul is torn in this emotional game Was it once love or is it now hate? I am drowning in my tears, I am suffocating in my fears All of the false hopes and dreams dead and gone All Melted into ashes to rise up and to be strong I am seeking for the remedy, the elixir of a new beginning My mind wants to scream, my voice wants to choke Pick me up, sunder my heart, I’m living alone in the dark With each drop that falls from the sky, I’m bleeding away your love This corpse of decay that once beat your name is setting me free for another love one day Was it once love? I’m experiencing hate, I’m drowning in my tears, I’m suffocating in my fears All of the false hopes and dreams dead and gone All melted into ashes to rise up and to be strong I am searching for the ray of light for a new beginning After being lost in the desert of scorching lies, I fall into a bloody gushing river, a river of life Washing away the bruises from yesterday Peeling the vivid masquerade clowns from my face I see the reflection of a pulchritudinous figure being carved out of stone I’m swimming in my tears, I’m overcoming my fears All of the false hopes and dreams dead and gone… Gentle hands upon rock foundation, the water flows freely A sanguine drop on the rose petal nurtures a new creation Feel the warmth. Start moving. Feel, take the breath of life Out of the ashes from hearts laceration, I’m resurrected in the light I am swimming in my tears, I am overcoming my fears All the false hopes and dreams dead and gone All melted into ashes to rise up and to be strong A new beginning, crossing the boundary to a new frontier

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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