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Repentant Trees

Paradise shines through. Making sinner trees repent! Rapture coming soon! Inspired by Raul Moreno

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/30/2009 4:23:00 PM

very original! Marty! nice! jimbo

Courtney Dyer

Date: 11/29/2009 8:45:00 PM

Awesome! I love the title!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/20/2009 4:00:00 PM

enjoyed reading

Elaine George

Date: 11/20/2009 1:48:00 PM

Wow! What a powerful Haiku. Thank you for shraring, Marty. Love, Lainie

Danny Nunn

Date: 11/19/2009 7:06:00 PM

Marty, glad that you liked my comment on sinner trees, The shady one are the worst kind..lol. Thanks for you words on Why I Write From The Heart. Wrote a song that I will post tomorrow, Hell, She Ain't Country...think you will like it...Danny

Sheol Moribund

Date: 11/19/2009 9:01:00 AM

Hi Marty: Short, but sweet. It's amazing how much you were able to say in so few words. BRAVO!!! Yours truly: Sheol

Danny Nunn

Date: 11/19/2009 5:10:00 AM

Yes sir, got go to watch them old sinner tree..lol. I like this one, good write...thanks for the words on my poems this morning...Danny

Brian Strand

Date: 11/19/2009 12:48:00 AM

Amen.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/18/2009 10:59:00 PM

Excellent haiku, Marty, wonderful theme.. impressive with a few words ... thankxxx for your comments tonight... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/18/2009 10:10:00 AM

Very interesting Haiku, using nature to make your idea come through. I like that very much. Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.

P Sheart

Date: 11/18/2009 7:55:00 AM

Marty, Wonderful Haku, truly enjoyed, smile. Good luck if you are entering it in Rauls contest! Smile. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/17/2009 11:39:00 PM

Good work, a very different take on this pic..I like it. BG

Lena Townsend

Date: 11/17/2009 11:37:00 PM

Wow, this one is powerful. Another excellent candidate for Raul's contest. Can't wait to read more of your work. Smiles from Lolita

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/17/2009 11:17:00 PM

Very nice, Marty. Filtered sunshine makes us see things. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 11/17/2009 10:11:00 PM

A for telling of man recited by nature? Soon...hopefully not, very interesting haiku. The light that helps us see, also makes us blind