Repentant Trees

Paradise shines through.
Making sinner trees repent!
Rapture coming soon!



Inspired by Raul Moreno
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 4:23 PM
very original! Marty! nice! jimbo
Dyer Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 8:45 PM
Awesome! I love the title!
Culverhouse Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 4:00 PM
enjoyed reading
George   Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 1:48 PM
Wow! What a powerful Haiku. Thank you for shraring, Marty. Love, Lainie
Nunn Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 7:06 PM
Marty, glad that you liked my comment on sinner trees, The shady one are the worst kind..lol. Thanks for you words on Why I Write From The Heart. Wrote a song that I will post tomorrow, Hell, She Ain't Country...think you will like it...Danny
Moribund Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 9:01 AM
Hi Marty: Short, but sweet. It's amazing how much you were able to say in so few words. BRAVO!!! Yours truly: Sheol
Nunn Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 5:10 AM
Yes sir, got go to watch them old sinner tree..lol. I like this one, good write...thanks for the words on my poems this morning...Danny
Strand Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 12:48 AM
Amen.Rgds Brian
Sweetheart Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 10:59 PM
Excellent haiku, Marty, wonderful theme.. impressive with a few words ... thankxxx for your comments tonight... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Delacroix Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 10:10 AM
Very interesting Haiku, using nature to make your idea come through. I like that very much. Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.
Sheart Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 7:55 AM
Marty, Wonderful Haku, truly enjoyed, smile. Good luck if you are entering it in Rauls contest! Smile. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty
Gorelick Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 11:39 PM
Good work, a very different take on this pic..I like it. BG
Townsend Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 11:37 PM
Wow, this one is powerful. Another excellent candidate for Raul's contest. Can't wait to read more of your work. Smiles from Lolita
Johnson Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 11:17 PM
Very nice, Marty. Filtered sunshine makes us see things. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce
Arteaga Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 10:11 PM
A for telling of man recited by nature? Soon...hopefully not, very interesting haiku. The light that helps us see, also makes us blind
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