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Repent!

Repent! By Dane Smith-Johnsen Holy water's veil Separates life and darkness. Judged upon His rock. Written for Raul's Rhythm of the Falls

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James Fraser
Date: 10/17/2009 6:04:00 PM
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Nice Haiku Dane Ann >> James
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Date: 10/14/2009 8:45:00 AM
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Amen! What an inspirational take on the subject. Best wishes in the contest. So much truth in your words. Blessings to you. Karen
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Jared Pickett
Date: 10/8/2009 10:39:00 AM
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Beautiful Haiku..... Good luck as you further yourself on this site and in the competition....:JP]
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Sean Kelly
Date: 10/8/2009 1:56:00 AM
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And for your penance , DA , continue to write in the 5-7-5 style and your reward may be a win , in the competition . Go in peace .....
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Raul Moreno
Date: 10/7/2009 4:14:00 PM
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Dane, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/7/2009 3:00:00 PM
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Nicely done Haiku. Good luck in the competition. Keep writing. Sara
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