Repent!

Repent!
     By Dane Smith-Johnsen

Holy water's veil
Separates life and darkness.
Judged upon His rock.

Written for Raul's Rhythm of the Falls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 6:04 PM
Nice Haiku Dane Ann >> James
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October 14, 2009 at 8:45 AM
Amen! What an inspirational take on the subject. Best wishes in the contest. So much truth in your words. Blessings to you. Karen
Pickett Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 10:39 AM
Beautiful Haiku..... Good luck as you further yourself on this site and in the competition....:JP]
Kelly Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 1:56 AM
And for your penance , DA , continue to write in the 5-7-5 style and your reward may be a win , in the competition . Go in peace .....
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October 7, 2009 at 4:14 PM
Dane, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul
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October 7, 2009 at 3:00 PM
Nicely done Haiku. Good luck in the competition. Keep writing. Sara
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