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A blue haze hovers in the dimmed sky while blackbirds sing a rusted shriek rusted leaves crunch and crackle Sun-tanned stalks cover fields The last red leaves drop Dark trees and shrubs Air chills cheeks flames dim brisk
Written: November 06, 2022 A November Nonet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 11/21/2022 4:45:00 PM
the sun-tanned stalks. Wow, gorgeous line, Lasaad.
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Date: 11/7/2022 9:54:00 AM
Lovely imagery of Autumn's nature Lasaad! :)
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Date: 11/7/2022 7:05:00 AM
Brilliant poem, Sotto:) hope to see this on top:)
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Date: 11/7/2022 5:43:00 AM
Excellent images of the season turning, fading, colorful! Well written poem my friend.
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Date: 11/7/2022 1:24:00 AM
Autumn is always beautiful, especially in the northern spheres. Best for a win.
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Date: 11/6/2022 8:16:00 PM
Can feel those Air chilling moments. Lasaad. Excellent poetry. Harry
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Date: 11/6/2022 8:08:00 PM
The salient feature of Nature in autumn is beautifully caught in your nonet... the coloring of leaves, their withering and the air growing chilly ! A worthy entry for the contest ! Wish you all the best dear friend !
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Date: 11/6/2022 12:56:00 PM
- Not so different from mine ... we see with the same glasses, Las :) - A slightly sad time when the colors (flames) fade... the long dark winter is near - Beautifully written, best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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