Repackaged and Ecstatic

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Repackaged and Ecstatic Reborn here now without baggage My spirit is light and carefree I come completely repackaged Wrapped in love and tranquility. Life is breezy I dance anew Reborn here now without baggage It’s astounding what God can do He has turned tragic to magic. A light shone upon my damage A voice whispered unto my heart Reborn here now without baggage I have God’s gift of a fresh start. Noble dawn, newfound path I walk My replacement soul’s ecstatic In praise of our dear Lord I talk Reborn here now without baggage. 9th October 2021

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/4/2021 4:01:00 PM

I loved "Repackaged And Ecstatic" Belle Well written and very uplifting ... there's always hope. And thanks for commenting on my poem "Transparency". Bill Baker

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/17/2021 9:11:00 AM

H Belle, your elation and your ecstatic faith have led you to this point in your life - may you always be blessed my friend, Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/17/2021 6:22:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer, may you always be blessed dear friend too. Hugs, Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2021 3:37:00 AM

Good work you have penned in this one about your faith. God does set us free from some of our bad habits but sometimes we have to work at it to overcome some of the other faults in our life. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/16/2021 5:10:00 AM

We do have to work hard on ourselves it’s true Sara, we do our best and yet there are times we do or say something we regret. As long as we repent and keep trying to be good I believe that we’re doing ok. Thank you… Belle

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/14/2021 5:34:00 PM

Wow! Such a lovely and inspiring poem, Belle! The form itself is enchanting - "Reborn here now without baggage" Love the refrain. Thank you so much for visiting my translations - I feel honoured. Hugs and blessings ~ Mala

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/14/2021 5:59:00 PM

I love that refrain too Malabika, the line was written by Unseeking Seeker and it was essential to be used in her contest. It’s a joy to have read your translations… With blessings and hugs, Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2021 1:14:00 PM

so beautiful and uplifting Belle:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/14/2021 5:54:00 PM

Thank you Jan, very grateful… Belle :-) hugs xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/11/2021 7:47:00 PM

Hello Belle ... I guess we all have baggage of some description and as time goes by it sticks in our mind, so to be reborn, we don't it to come with us - thanks Belle - Lindsay

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/14/2021 5:50:00 PM

Hi Lindsay, it’s good to let go of of past regrets allowing us to enjoy whatever comes next. Thank you so much, comments truly appreciated … Belle