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Renewal

An affinity for romance re-kindled Our autumn walk severed from the rush of people A different kind of membership a cool zone as leaves fall like mellow tones in ballads weather proofing our path brittle coins of gold, red, orange that rattle the ground with color that brush against the soothing ease of desire. Leaves bedding to mute the snap of word sharpness to meld decay and comfort to filter an air of ghostly tension. Our fingers entwine as we re-build faith together push through the crowded disappointments of memory store ourselves away from past damaged pieces. Cradled walking amid leaves, bone weary that fall as footprints re-imagined as hurt unraveling Poem revised late September 2020

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Date: 1/9/2024 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/9/2024 4:37:00 PM
Thanks very much, Silent One. I appreciate your stop by + congratulatory note. Be well. Brian
Date: 1/8/2024 7:33:00 AM
Hearty Congratulations on your contest win, Brian, with this excellent poem.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/8/2024 7:38:00 AM
Many thanks, Sotto Poet. After my 2 recent NA's, the recognition here was better than morning coffee. Be well. Brian
Date: 10/2/2020 10:43:00 AM
An excellent write Brian, enjoyed very much, congrats on a nice win!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/2/2020 10:57:00 AM
Hi John Thanks for your message + for initiating a contest for the many of us who receive NA's on our submissions. It's grand to receive the recognition as we resubmit work. Second chances appreciated. Best wishes Brian

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