Renew

the sound of the wind joins the smell of the ocean to relax and sooth

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 11:14:00 AM

Congratulations Francine on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 9:12:00 PM

Congrats on the 8th place win, Francine

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/11/2010 2:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your being in the winner's circle. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/11/2010 1:05:00 PM

Indeed, this is a very soothing haiku, Francine. Congratulations on your success in the contest! And hope you have some great plans for your birthday. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2010 11:36:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive write..I feel like that I am there..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 7/11/2010 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations, Francine. on your worthy poem's place, Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2010 10:02:00 AM

Great depiction of sound and smell, Francine. Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2010 9:15:00 AM

Congrats Francine on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this beautiful Haiku depicting the vacation photos... thankxxx for supporting my contest.. with luv..

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/9/2010 3:11:00 PM

Yes! This is so lovely. I can feel the essence of this poem caressing my cheeks as I walk along the beach. Great job! Joseph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2010 11:36:00 PM

A nice haiku with good images