Home » Poems » Gershon Wolf » Removed from Omar's Bucket List

Removed from Omar's Bucket List

       First grade class trip, a slow cruise down the Nile
       So rudely derailed by three crocodiles

          They flashed kids their grins
          They wanted to sin!

       Newly evolved ~ erectile reptiles!

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/20/2025 3:38:00 PM

That chemical factory up river -- 90 year olds making pilgrimages to drink from the sacred waters. This story needs a climax, and a sequel. See what you started! Rascal you.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/20/2025 6:41:00 PM

Just call me 'a little rascal.' lol. Thanks, Joe.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/20/2025 11:46:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your write. Have a wonderful day writing away...............

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/20/2025 6:44:00 PM

Thank you, Paula.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/20/2025 9:50:00 AM

EEGADS...adds a whole new dimension to school field trips. yikes