Removed from Omar's Bucket List

       First grade class trip, a slow cruise down the Nile
       So rudely derailed by three crocodiles

          They flashed kids their grins
          They wanted to sin!

       Newly evolved ~ erectile reptiles!
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DiMino Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 3:38 PM
That chemical factory up river -- 90 year olds making pilgrimages to drink from the sacred waters. This story needs a climax, and a sequel. See what you started! Rascal you.
Wolf Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 6:41 PM
Just call me 'a little rascal.' lol. Thanks, Joe.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:46 AM
I enjoyed reading your write. Have a wonderful day writing away...............
Wolf Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 6:44 PM
Thank you, Paula.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 9:50 AM
EEGADS...adds a whole new dimension to school field trips. yikes
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