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Kim Patrice Nunez
Complete the Lines Contest - Mary Oliver #1 - 3rd Place
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
26 July 2015

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Lycia Harding

Date: 8/9/2015 7:57:00 PM

Thoughtful write with so much inherent depth. Love this! Congrats on your win, Poet. xoxo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2015 8:34:00 PM

so glad this scored high. I remember this one and how much I enjoyed it. BIG congrats.

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/5/2015 11:03:00 AM

so much power in such few words....wisdom occurs when knowledge is disturbed....by Faith and Faith alone, the only power higher....because it brings out our best, the only way it can inspire....;)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/5/2015 12:54:00 AM

fascinating wordplay, kim.. glad you came around my contest page.. thanks and big congrats!

Kp Nunez
Date: 8/5/2015 2:25:00 PM

Thank you too, Nette, for always coming up with the inspiration! hugs

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/4/2015 9:27:00 PM

Hi Kim, what a brilliant way to complete the lines! I love it! Congratulations on your sweet win! Pandita

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/4/2015 12:34:00 PM

Love the sage wisdom in your winning poem, Kim! Congrats :)

Tammy Reams

Date: 8/4/2015 8:35:00 AM

Love the words in this write Kim! Congrats on your win.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/4/2015 5:00:00 AM

Wise are those who understand the importance of knowledge! ~ Your completion of that first line is uniquely done, Kim. ~ congratulations on another podium finish:) hugs // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/4/2015 12:43:00 AM

Congrats on ur winning awesome write Kim! Wonderful imagery!

Skat A

Date: 8/4/2015 12:42:00 AM

Kim, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

Eve Roper

Date: 8/3/2015 9:19:00 PM

Kim,Beautiful congratulatations on your win a 7 wonderful write. Hugs Eve

John Lawless

Date: 8/3/2015 8:19:00 AM

Beautifully phrased exposure of the limits of "Knowledge without wisdom". Congrats on the win.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 7/28/2015 8:05:00 PM

Girl, you have deep talent that I adore!! :O)) Thanks for your kind visit, better late than never ..hehe .. love it, dear!! ^_^

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/28/2015 6:29:00 PM

Kim, this is great. It takes reading more than once, but that just increases the fun.

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/28/2015 2:39:00 PM

Your words where enchanting and you pulled off a great bit of poetry here with a deeper meaning submerged within their wisdom. Emile.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/28/2015 5:29:00 AM

I'm really glad to read this uplifted piece, knowledge is not by power and wisdom is a gift...........A.M.

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/28/2015 1:37:00 AM

So true and eloquent! A brilliant use of persona...magnificent angle...wisdom is wealth, and the way you conjoin the two pillars of thought and history is like a beautiful, synergistic relationship Kim...J.A.B. A FAV!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/28/2015 12:58:00 AM

How true, Kim- Knowledge through the senses, wisdom through the soul. A little bit of magic, Kim. Viv x

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/28/2015 12:44:00 AM

What a lovely write here, wisdom is quite different from knowledge I an glad you find that out yourself. Wise write............A.M.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/27/2015 1:35:00 PM

Lovely write, Kim. Wisdom is a gift given to those who ask. I wish you good luck in the contest with this. Thank you for your recent visits to my work....God bless.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2015 8:40:00 AM

Kim, I love how you did a metaphorical one here. Yes, knowledge and wisdom are DIFFERENT and it's great that you recognize that difference. With Google, Knowledge is now the number one thing they "go to" in this world. Only the wise ones seek more wisdom! BTW, I felt good about my own entry in this contest till I saw her rule that I needed to change the theme. I did a Sara Teasdale's first line, but failed to read the poem first. It turns out, Teasdale's is a love poem just like mine. YIKES

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 7/27/2015 5:10:00 AM

Very clever. i like it! all the best Kim

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/26/2015 7:35:00 PM

Wow Kim... this is a great poem to remind us that it is better to be wise - its often said that too much knowledge is not always a good thing - good luck Kim - Lindsay

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