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Thoughtful write with so much inherent depth. Love this! Congrats on your win, Poet. xoxo

so glad this scored high. I remember this one and how much I enjoyed it. BIG congrats.

so much power in such few words....wisdom occurs when knowledge is disturbed....by Faith and Faith alone, the only power higher....because it brings out our best, the only way it can inspire....;)

fascinating wordplay, kim.. glad you came around my contest page.. thanks and big congrats!

Hi Kim, what a brilliant way to complete the lines! I love it! Congratulations on your sweet win! Pandita

Love the sage wisdom in your winning poem, Kim! Congrats :)

Love the words in this write Kim! Congrats on your win.

Wise are those who understand the importance of knowledge! ~ Your completion of that first line is uniquely done, Kim. ~ congratulations on another podium finish:) hugs // paul

Congrats on ur winning awesome write Kim! Wonderful imagery!

Kim, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

Kim,Beautiful congratulatations on your win a 7 wonderful write. Hugs Eve

Beautifully phrased exposure of the limits of "Knowledge without wisdom". Congrats on the win.

Girl, you have deep talent that I adore!! :O)) Thanks for your kind visit, better late than never ..hehe .. love it, dear!! ^_^

Kim, this is great. It takes reading more than once, but that just increases the fun.

Your words where enchanting and you pulled off a great bit of poetry here with a deeper meaning submerged within their wisdom. Emile.

I'm really glad to read this uplifted piece, knowledge is not by power and wisdom is a gift...........A.M.

So true and eloquent! A brilliant use of persona...magnificent angle...wisdom is wealth, and the way you conjoin the two pillars of thought and history is like a beautiful, synergistic relationship Kim...J.A.B. A FAV!

How true, Kim- Knowledge through the senses, wisdom through the soul. A little bit of magic, Kim. Viv x

What a lovely write here, wisdom is quite different from knowledge I an glad you find that out yourself. Wise write............A.M.

Lovely write, Kim. Wisdom is a gift given to those who ask. I wish you good luck in the contest with this. Thank you for your recent visits to my work....God bless.

Kim, I love how you did a metaphorical one here. Yes, knowledge and wisdom are DIFFERENT and it's great that you recognize that difference. With Google, Knowledge is now the number one thing they "go to" in this world. Only the wise ones seek more wisdom! BTW, I felt good about my own entry in this contest till I saw her rule that I needed to change the theme. I did a Sara Teasdale's first line, but failed to read the poem first. It turns out, Teasdale's is a love poem just like mine. YIKES

Very clever. i like it! all the best Kim

Wow Kim... this is a great poem to remind us that it is better to be wise - its often said that too much knowledge is not always a good thing - good luck Kim - Lindsay