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Reminiscing About Small Town Life

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If you live in a bigger town, you probably also know what I am speaking about, as blocks of people tend to form their own little "mini-small town" to take care of their children, and each other. It is a natural way to protect the pack.

I unconditionally love the eutony heard by my soul when I hear certain words. zing, zip, zeal, zest, zealot, zipper, and z, are particular favorites, for several sing-songy reasons, slithering into my dendrites in a pleasing way. South reminds me of my dad’s Southside Gang, a group of six boys who grew up together, bonding in the mysterious ways of boys who live in a small town, and find each other in Kindergarten, knowing they will be together their entire lives. Living the best life, as besties, only one left, and I do wonder about him. Poor man. The words 'church' and 'lurch' have a certain bite. They click on my tongue. Small town churches are the same, still helping us reminisce about a society and a time when everyone in a community rises up to straighten the youth out, and help them to become the best selves they can be. It is a mystery to me how they all gave me advice, none of it the same, and yet I turned out magically all right. I have no idea why I am such a sentimental mood his evening, but it is a rather pleasant thing to cough up these terrific memories of a small town. If you are still living in one, I hope you know how lucky you are.

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Date: 12/16/2018 7:53:00 AM
"and yet I turned out magically all right." Because you used your own brain to sort out the advice and find what worked best in your life. If only others would do so. Well penned.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/16/2018 10:29:00 AM
It was amazing how many tried to FIX me, and I never truly believed I was broken.

Book: Shattered Sighs