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Remembrances ---Tanka

We lay on the grass Softened by love's rhapsody Deaf,to breeze that chimes Recalling all youthful dreams of candle light and stardust. Tanka(s) Contest REVISED, EASIER, more FREE For Amy Green from Carly L

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Date: 5/5/2014 11:05:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win. This is so beautiful and romantic its going in my favourites! Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 4/30/2014 10:28:00 PM
great thing going, carly... sweet cingrats and here's too more!.. hugggs
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Date: 4/29/2014 1:54:00 PM
What a beautiful tanka, Carly! Love the picture of a couple lying on the grass, so caught up on "love's rhapsody" that they don't even hear the wind chimes. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 4/27/2014 6:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/27/2014 6:45:00 PM
I love this romantic one. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 4/27/2014 7:12:00 AM
A brilliant piece made you win, congrats, Carly
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Date: 4/27/2014 2:05:00 AM
So beautiful n romantic Carly ! Leaves one dreaming, congrats on great win !
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Date: 4/27/2014 1:46:00 AM
Carly, , awesome, winning tanka.... congrats on your super win. ... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:28:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on memories with emotions, carly
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