Remembrances ---Tanka
We lay on the grass
Softened by love's rhapsody
Deaf,to breeze that chimes
Recalling all youthful dreams
of candle light and stardust.
Tanka(s) Contest REVISED, EASIER, more FREE
For Amy Green from Carly L
Copyright © Carly Lalion | Year Posted 2014
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