Remembering Sweet Dawns and Verdant Greens

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Old Note- Deleted, too personal and written for family after my demise.

New Note (Sept 3, 2017)- I edited only one verse in this poem, changed the word
-"desperate" - to - "pleading"- . Tossed a coin on that decision....
I always face a hard decision , about how much to edit my older works(or even edit at all), especially those going back 25/46 years....

Remembering Sweet Dawns And Verdant Greens When rose-covered days grace thy waning years thee hast great courage to face thy great fears; summon up thy treasures by mere thought celebrate past life for love, all it has wrought. Remembering sweet dawns and verdant greens gems of youth and wonders found in thy teens; nights of peace, many good times with thy friends future promise, waiting thy step around the bends! Of treasured HOPE- this great truth beware thy life is walking steps up winding stairs; love and joy, both oft come from wizened footfalls thus be true to thy inner spirit's pleading calls! When rose-covered days grace thy waning years thee hast great courage to face thy great fears; summon up thy treasures by mere thought celebrate past life for love, all it has wrought. Robert J. Lindley, 11-16- 2002

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 9/3/2017 6:06:00 PM

Hi Robert, as always, your words touch a place deep inside of me. Such wonderful content in such excellent poetry. We always have our wonderful thoughts to look back on Robert. This is going into my faves. Your Friend always....Mike.

Lin Lane

Date: 9/3/2017 10:46:00 AM

What a wonderful title, Robert...followed by such a terrific poem of tender memories. The older we get, the more memories our hearts hold.