Remembering Mama

My mother sweeping up the floor,
Greeting neighbors at the door,
Stopping for a cup of tea
With cookies and some milk for me.

She'd make the bed, do other chores
Before hanging the clothes outdoors.
My mama led a busy life,
But still she was a happy wife.

The meals from Mama's hands that came
Would put most restaurants to shame.
She meant the world to Dad and me.
She's with me still in memory.

I see her shining chestnut hair
With tortoise comb to hold it there.
She kept it all in ordered check,
Except for curls on back of neck.

She gazed at me with mother's pride
Until the very day she died.
I know there'll never be another
Who could love me as did Mother.

Mother's always in my prayer.
I ask that she be happy there
With floors to sweep and beds to make
Someone to love, for love's own sake.

For Deborah's contest

won 13th
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Richards Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 1:53 PM
Such lovely memories that stay forever in a heart....a lovely tribute to your mother, Joyce! Congratulations! ~ Love, Carrie
Mehta Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 9:56 PM
Congrats on the win. A fine tribute
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 8:52 PM
A big congratulations to you for making the winners' circle, JOyce, There was some tough competition in THIS contest. Lots of people with great moms inspiring great poetry! Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 6:25 AM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem and placement in Debbie's contest.. a beautiful write and wonderful win for u to so enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie.. many thankxxx for your always special comments too..
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 3:29 PM
MY GOSH, not only our numbers are similar, but also our moms!! MY mom was a cleanaholic!! always she had a mop or dust rag in her hand. and as you know, the long red hair too. But hers was very red, like Irish lass red and that's why I always asked her if her hair was pink or orange, to tease her. Sorry yours is gone now. I think mine will stay around a long time. BTW, I cannot recall teh 9/11 contest. Where had I seen yours and commented on it?? LUv, Andrea
Haick Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 3:26 PM
God bless all of our Mothers who put their children and spouses first..and still had more to give others...Our Lord said to those who have much, much will be given...Beautiful, Joyce...and thank your for reading mine to my Mama and leaving those kind comments for me, today..Love, audrey
Roberts Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 10:28 AM
that was beautiful
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April 1, 2010 at 9:58 AM
Beautifully written and filled with heart-warming memories and a lovely description of your mom, Sue. Best wishes for success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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