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Remembering a Moment

A stillness in stature caused heart to pause a face bestilled rapture my soul in applause A flood of feelings flow into me sets my mind ticking thoughts running free A rushed flick of films flow from inside catch what I wanted locked hells reside Opening my hand I gasped with awe remembering the wonders of forgotten befores Glimmered in palm A joy of life held memories of moments I never could sell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/19/2009 6:52:00 AM
Jayne, This is a very wonderful poem. Moments that glimmer...memories. I love it. DAS-J
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Date: 7/14/2009 10:43:00 AM
Memories are to be savoured, to be re-read, re-viewed at leisure by the beholder, lovely poem>>James
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Date: 7/14/2009 9:15:00 AM
Jayne, your poem is packed so full of emotion. I love reading your poetry. Please continue your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2009 2:02:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to capture the emotions. On thing you may want to think about is that you start out with a rhyming poem in the first three stanzas then switch to free verse. Was that intentional? Those memories are precious aren't they. Thank you for sharing your thought with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 7/12/2009 11:04:00 PM
love this, i enjoy your work so much. thank you. yvette
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