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Remember what now you forget. The days we've spent together and that will never come back. Remember all the laughs and talking we had in the park, listening to the birds in Spring, listening to ourselves in all the seasons. Remember about the days we used to make love without talking, and the days we used to talk without making love. The wind whistling on the windows, in front of our bedroom, while we were embraced in that poor apartment. How poor we were those years with nothing but love?. The wind blew too strong for us that got us apart because we were living on a scratch. After many years, life took us to another level. We are not much richer now, but are missing each other. Different lives, different countries, but a feeling coming alive from the same heart. Nothing but love, nothing but laughs, both embraced, nobody richer than us, keeping those unforgettable years. Nobody can delete that.

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Date: 11/4/2023 8:25:00 PM
I'm glad you can remember the good times, Maria, life has its ups and downs. Be positive and enjoy each day, one at a time, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/5/2023 1:31:00 AM
Yes Bill, we need to be positive, of course. Thanks for your lovely words. Blessings!
Date: 11/3/2023 11:57:00 PM
Life can be cruel. Yo get richer you are now separated. But the memories remain. No one can take that from you. Will you find solace elsewhere? I doubt it. Love sorrowful poem. Blessings.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/4/2023 1:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor. It's life...! Have a nice weekend!
Date: 11/3/2023 2:52:00 PM
a beautifully crafted type of remembrance poem of lost love. Your soft words touched my heart. You're right...in the end, neither time, distance, or circumstance can erase time well spent in love. You seem to have a sweet soul. Thanks for sharing your words, Sara
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/4/2023 1:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara, for your always caring words. Life is changing all the time, but memories stay always with us. Have a great weekend. Blessings
Date: 11/3/2023 7:40:00 AM
so touching an beautiful words, regrets can be inspiring future, always a lesson from loving someone, Thanks Maria, Have a sweet weekend
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/3/2023 10:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Yann. Have a nice weekend you tooxxx

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