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Remembering

Remember what now you forget.
The days we've spent together
and that will never come back.
     Remember all the laughs 
and talking we had in the park,
listening to the birds in Spring, 
listening to ourselves in all the seasons.
     Remember about the days we used to make love without talking, 
and the days we used to talk without making love.
The wind whistling on the windows, in front of our bedroom, while we were embraced in that poor apartment.
       How poor we were those years
with nothing but love?.
The wind blew too strong for us that got us apart because we were living on a scratch.
       After many years, life took us to another level. 
We are not much richer now, but are missing each other.
Different lives, different countries, but a feeling coming alive from the same heart.
       Nothing but love, nothing but laughs, both embraced, nobody richer than us, 
keeping those unforgettable years. Nobody can delete that.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 8:25 PM
I'm glad you can remember the good times, Maria, life has its ups and downs. Be positive and enjoy each day, one at a time, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 1:31 AM
Yes Bill, we need to be positive, of course. Thanks for your lovely words. Blessings!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 11:57 PM
Life can be cruel. Yo get richer you are now separated. But the memories remain. No one can take that from you. Will you find solace elsewhere? I doubt it. Love sorrowful poem. Blessings.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 1:43 AM
Thank you so much Victor. It's life...! Have a nice weekend!
Rolland Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 7:40 AM
so touching an beautiful words, regrets can be inspiring future, always a lesson from loving someone, Thanks Maria, Have a sweet weekend
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Thank you so much Yann. Have a nice weekend you tooxxx
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