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Remember when we were funny kids

Remember when we were kids, we use to laugh out loud ? We use to stay awake for days, jumping and running.. Breaking the limits of sound.... Remember when we had a fight for the very first time and you cried ? We use to be funny kids playing all around, no space for sadness or tears.... Except the tears of joy , those we couldn't hide... Remember when we use to make branks to uncle deen ? We throw at him a pocket of painting, we wrapped his legs... Remember when we broke his phone screen ? Remember when we use to run through the woods to have fun ? Funny kids we were , I believe we still, I know we're old but our souls still young... If you don't believe me, let's make a race and start to run.... All these memories about our days when we were kids is what's keeping me a life... There's nothing to worry about when we were kids exibt having fun... Now see how life cut our throats with her knife..... Funny kids, yes funny kids that's how we use to be... Funny oh yeah funny, you can't remember but believe me it's real... In my memory I look to the mirror and I see the funny kid who still lives inside of me...

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Date: 1/30/2016 9:24:00 AM
how i really felt my heart lifting with this piece, this will become one of my best favorites for sure, though i couldn't remember so much 'cause i don't want to, but reading this piece makes me feel some nostalgia, this is well penned Dalia, heartfelt, this ink has touched my mind
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/3/2016 1:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, I appreciate it, //:)
Date: 1/5/2016 4:24:00 PM
Hi Dalia, i do Love this one. Everything was so carefree in those childhood days. We had no idea what was to come with adulthood. Some of us have not lost the spirit of our childhood days, that little boy is always ready to come forth and have some fun. This piece has brought out many memories. One reads through your lines of memory and then the streams of the readers own memory start to run. A seven and a fav for this wonderful write....Vladislav.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/5/2016 4:40:00 PM
Oh my friend can't even start to tell how much I'm honored and happy with this capturing and delightful comment , I really do appreciate your kind and sweet words , , thanks and hugs / / :)
Date: 10/22/2015 12:07:00 PM
"Now see how life cut our throats with her knife....." I love that poetic line...yes, we all have that inner kid inside us; I know I do, and I can relate to this poem. Great work! Always, Laura
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/22/2015 12:18:00 PM
Thank u very much my sweet Laura for ur beautiful comment , I really do appreciate your kindness and ur supporting words.....words like these what makes the poets wants to write more..... Love and hugs :)
Date: 10/21/2015 12:29:00 PM
do you remember hide and go seek....do you remember how candy made the stomach weak....do you remember riding bikes all day long....do you remember how it was childhood that made us strong....;)
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/21/2015 1:40:00 PM
Yes , I do no one can forget these lovely, beautiful memories......they live with us 4 ever.... thank you very much for stopping by I really do appreciate...hugs... :D
Date: 10/21/2015 11:32:00 AM
Nice one babe!
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/21/2015 11:52:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend.....I'm glad you liked it...... :)
Date: 10/20/2015 4:51:00 PM
still love going to the park and going on the swings and seesaw lol - some things never leave us :-) hugs jan xx
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/20/2015 4:56:00 PM
Who doesn't.... lol No one can forget a part of his soul ....we'll have memories bad one's and good one's they keep living inside of us .....glad u liked it and thank u for stopping by I really do appreciate it..... Love and hugs :)