Remember When

Remember when we acted so sly,
Going to lunch and getting high?
Remember when we camped and drank all night,
All of us glowing in the fires light?

Remember the girls we used to date,
how they never used to make us wait?
Remember the time we all skipped school?
Always together, forever, free and cool.

Remember how we all dressed the same,
and thought those over 20 were lame?
Remember that awesome party we had,
and you got busted by your mom and dad?

Remember when you went away?
I have not seen you since that day.




For the "Do You Remember" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 5:00 PM
Christopher' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT
Kovacs Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 12:04 PM
Good job. Congrats
Bunton Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 12:20 PM
Thank You!! :)
Macfarlane Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 12:40 PM
Well done! Congrats on your wonderful win! Hugs
Bunton Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 2:52 PM
Thank You! :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 6:27 AM
sorry i am late with congratulations Christopher , very unintentional xx
Bunton Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 2:54 PM
Thank you! Its ok. Its not easy congratulating everyone, and I'm sure I have missed people, even you, in the past and probably will so again.
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:05 PM
now this is the kind of sonnet I like to see, modern and nostalgic at the same time. I really enjoyed this. Congrats.
Bunton Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 7:39 PM
Thank You! :)
Roberts Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 6:51 PM
Congratulations Christopher...Seren
Bunton Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 8:11 PM
Thank You! :)
Guzzi Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 5:21 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Bunton Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 8:11 PM
Thank You! :)
A   Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 8:14 AM
Good morning Christopher Bunton ;-) ~ congratulations with the wonderful win in Frank's ""DO YOU REMEMBER? " contest. have yourself a nice day~ xox~PD
Bunton Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 8:10 PM
Thank You! :)
Ober Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 6:50 AM
Wow, this really breaks the mould of a typical sonnet - I love it. The blunt honesty here is refreshing, and the last two lines are perfect. Congrats!
Bunton Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 8:08 PM
Thank You! :)
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