Remember The Picnics

Remember the picnics 
            one day they’ll be gone
                            with only a memory to blanket the green

For warm summer days 
           are not meant to remain
                  we feast them away with the wine of our youth

Remember the picnics 
             when winter blows in
                     when ice cycles forecast the cold days ahead

It’s then that we need them 
           through every last sigh
                    to hold once again in the bloom of our hearts

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Date: 7/21/2025 4:52:00 AM
Picnics seem like the thing of the past not completely but people picnic less l believe. Your wonderful poem took me back to my picnic days…..hot tea out a flask, sandwiches, strawberries and always a treaty or two! Lovely memories….thankyou! Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/22/2025 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Deb and I felt like "Pic Nics" could also generalize many wonderful times of our lives! Thank you xxoo
Date: 7/14/2025 11:19:00 PM
We should savor every moment in life. Undertake many picnics in favorable times, so that we can relish their memories when winter comes into our lives and we are no more able to see and enjoy what's around. Beautifully written dear Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/15/2025 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Valsa xxoo
Date: 7/12/2025 6:37:00 AM
- So important to remember when winter comes, Mike - Lovely poem :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/12/2025 7:32:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, a Happy Weekend to you as well xxoo
Date: 7/11/2025 7:40:00 AM
Yes dear Mike, we should and must learn how to appreciate what we have all around us before its all gone, in nature and in so many ways. Youv delivered something so soulfully moving in such a seamless and poetic manner! I love the way youv described summer picnics, as good times and warm moments! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/12/2025 4:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Ink Empress, your words and thoughts are meaningful and appreciated!!!
Date: 7/10/2025 3:05:00 PM
Hello Mike, Ohhh such a gentle nudge to savor the present, to cherish the people we love and to tuck these golden moments away for the winters to come. I’m grateful for every nuance of life. Enchanting. Summer Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/11/2025 4:16:00 AM
Thank you Daniel and the very same to you, Happy Friday !!
Date: 7/9/2025 9:33:00 AM
I enjoy thinking back to picnics of the past. This was a thoughtful poem, Mike. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/11/2025 4:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Bill, Happy Friday!!
Date: 7/9/2025 7:49:00 AM
The picnic is fun and you have done well writing with gratitude for summer. I enjoyed this. Great poem Mike. :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/11/2025 4:15:00 AM
Thank you so Heidi , I hope you are feeling well! Happy Friday xxoo
Date: 7/9/2025 5:28:00 AM
Summer's still here so I'm going to revel in it. Haven't had our first picnic of the season yet. Your poem will be the inspiration to get planning.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2025 6:24:00 AM
Great idea! Thanks Tom!!
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