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Remember Me

remember me well all the good times of laughter as I join the hereafter speak well of our time that we shared here together of how we weathered the storms from midnight to morn we loved our way to freedom to eternity re-born TLH © 07-27-2012
This perhaps is not a true Sedoka, but is better than I Don't Know. :)

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Date: 8/10/2012 10:51:00 PM
I'm glad I came back to find this one. It's awesome, Tanya.
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Date: 7/31/2012 10:44:00 AM
I agree with Russell. This poem flows beautifully and works well no matter what you call it! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/30/2012 5:30:00 PM
This is a wonderful write my friend! Just a note, the Sedoka usually has 2 Katautas which are 5/7/7 syllable counts but I don't think that there is anything that says you can't have 3 Katautas within a write...might not be called a Sedoka but it works! Anyways, I really do love this poem, a definite finality to it, a sweet goodbye! Great Work!!
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