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Remember Me

Written: June 22, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Silent One Quote: Your name is upon my tongue, your image is in my sight, your memory is in my heart. Where can I send these words that I write ? By Rumi ******************* Remember Me— Not as a wimpy palimpsest pressed in dust, but as a melodic requiem Swelling through sycamores, a voice that thrums in amber air. Stands out as brilliant, warm, and vivid— candles in our memories for days. I was your hubris and nemesis— your panacea of song, a sylphlike sigh whispered woven in the welkin’s velvet veil pure awareness of your heart. Do not shred me into ephemera, nor replace my passion— with forgetfulness I am the obelisk in your memory’s scope the oculus through which eternity gropes. Since death may alleviate with deceit, Since shadows unravel the nexus of our days, my love wincing, scintillating— a sumptuous aurora that presses the stygian night. Remember me— in the whispering calyx of summer blooms, in the susurrous lagoon where cicadas chant, in every wistful whisper of wind that morphs weariness into wonder. I am not lost, but vestigial luminous flame a perpetuum pulse a virtuoso of silence hunting for your sapphire necklace everlasting will, singing still— commit me to your memory.
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Ibeh Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 1:42 PM
Great poem, as usual, Lasaad. I've learned a new word, "palimpsest." Congratulations on your deserving win!
Jones Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 6:53 PM
“I was your hubris and nemesis— your panacea of song, a sylphlike sigh whispered woven in the welkin’s velvet veil pure awareness of your heart.” Adore this stanza! It is tender yet beautiful in a strong way! Your brilliance will always win! Your quote choice was perfect as usual. Congratulations on your win!
Hind Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 4:19 PM
this one is haunting too- you did it this well, and the feeling grabs at the reader :)
One Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 10:37 AM
A poem that shows a reluctance to go, but a craving to be remembered, so many lovers will feel your words and relate to this poem.. I too, have had similar experience, were someone who was close to be has decided to become absent, due to her own needs... I do wonder, what about my needs? And I see that in your poem... Loved this line "I was your hubris and nemesis." I guess that speaks volumes.... Great use of vocabulary.. Congratulations on your placement..
Buhagiar Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 11:13 PM
The mastery of your vocabulary is intelligent and admirable. You draw the person near your soul, and they will remember. Best for a win.
Daniel Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 9:18 PM
I agree with Valsa, simply astounding, Sotto:)
George Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 8:57 PM
Excellent... No other words will suit this composition. If l tell more on the beauty of this poem, it will be superfluous. A sure winner. Into my FAVE.
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June 22, 2026 at 3:42 PM
Hello Sotto Poet, It sounds to me this person wants to be remembered. i would remember this person. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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