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Remember Me

Remember me in shadows of the past with blinders off and heart agape recall me in the morning's dawn recast Alongside yesterdays of sweet escape beneath a burning sun as we took shape Remind me of the kids that we once were bring image to my mind of all that was Mention all the silly things you did to stir my eager soul before the days of Oz, before the days of medicated gauze. Bring awareness to this fading flower take her to the garden make her smile For in every vanishing hour lives the blossom of yesterday's mile remember her, love her, all the while

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Date: 5/29/2024 6:42:00 AM
Dear Rose, A breathtaking journey through nostalgia and longing. The word you inked captures the essence of fleeting memories and the beauty of cherishing the past. I loved how each line is the passage of time and the importance of holding onto moments. Absolutely stunning work! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/28/2024 10:59:00 AM
A feel of romance in these lines. I enjoyed reading them today. Thanks for sharing . Sara K
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/28/2024 12:21:00 PM
thank you for stopping by my poetry Sara
Date: 5/28/2024 9:05:00 AM
I will certainly not forget you. Lovely poem with perfect imagery and metaphoric allusions.
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Date: 5/28/2024 12:20:00 PM
I certainly won't forget you either Victor
Date: 5/28/2024 3:30:00 AM
Beautiful, stunning write. Great poetry! You get another FAV! Blessings. As long as there are spring sunrises...buds into roses, kisses into bouquets, chocolates with valentines -- there Love will also blossom...perennial bloom of the Sacred Heart.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/28/2024 3:49:00 AM
You are too kind Joe, you just turned a frowning heart into a smiley one, just by being you, have a great day :)
Date: 5/27/2024 5:06:00 PM
what a touching poem, Rose. Your words touched my soul. I sometimes have those thoughts of 'remember me when...I was younger, when I was vibrant and carefree...now, like you, I'm fading and occasionally just need a reminder. Well done. Faving...enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/28/2024 3:50:00 AM
I pray you never fade from my memory or my heart, your such a valuable member of this place, and I hold you in high esteem Sara

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