Remember Me


Remember me in shadows of the past 
with blinders off and heart agape 
recall me in the morning's dawn recast 
Alongside yesterdays of sweet escape  
beneath a burning sun  as we took shape  

Remind me of the kids that we once were 
bring image to my mind of all that was 
Mention all the silly things you did to stir  
my eager soul before the days of Oz,  
before the days of medicated gauze. 

Bring awareness to this fading flower     
take her to the garden make her smile     
For in every vanishing hour 
lives the blossom of yesterday's mile 
remember her, love her, all the while

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 5/29/2024 6:42:00 AM
Dear Rose, A breathtaking journey through nostalgia and longing. The word you inked captures the essence of fleeting memories and the beauty of cherishing the past. I loved how each line is the passage of time and the importance of holding onto moments. Absolutely stunning work! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/28/2024 10:59:00 AM
A feel of romance in these lines. I enjoyed reading them today. Thanks for sharing . Sara K
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Date: 5/28/2024 12:21:00 PM
thank you for stopping by my poetry Sara
Date: 5/28/2024 9:05:00 AM
I will certainly not forget you. Lovely poem with perfect imagery and metaphoric allusions.
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Date: 5/28/2024 12:20:00 PM
I certainly won't forget you either Victor
Date: 5/28/2024 3:30:00 AM
Beautiful, stunning write. Great poetry! You get another FAV! Blessings. As long as there are spring sunrises...buds into roses, kisses into bouquets, chocolates with valentines -- there Love will also blossom...perennial bloom of the Sacred Heart.
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Date: 5/28/2024 3:49:00 AM
You are too kind Joe, you just turned a frowning heart into a smiley one, just by being you, have a great day :)
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