Remains of Time

How did it get late so soon? It’s night before it’s afternoon. December is here before it’s June. My goodness how the time has flewn. How did it get so late so soon?  — Dr. Seuss

REMAINS OF TIME

the moment i landed,
time, my time, started.
meant nothing when i cried,
when i babbled,
when i fell,
when mom kissed my un-wells.

then i was educated
and time moved slowly
as i stared out the schoolhouse window,
waited for Pavlov’s bell…

in time,
time was fun,
floating on a ship—
friendship, kinship,
proverbial ship.

time took a turn
as kin withered
and stoned
or decomposed in windblown ashes…

time taps me in places—
head, nose, shoulder bones.
i shudder…i shun,
in wonderment i run.

time finds me
in tears…on my knees,
   beholden
to clarity.

i stare in its face—
its remains.

11/7/2021
“T” Contest new or old
Sponsor: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Kim, wonderful writing and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "T" Contest, like the quote too ~ love and serenity _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 10:12 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 3:32 PM
Yes! You have really captured the essence of our human experience with time, Kim. Wonderful! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 6:30 PM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "REMAINS OF TIME" is a creative story/write. Time is a funny thing. Have a blessed day.....................
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 6:30 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Alex Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 6:37 AM
Great work as usual. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 6:29 PM
Thank you!
George Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 9:13 PM
Time is a trickster.... ! It pleases, annoys, baffles and stupyfies. You have captured all its erratic phases !
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 5:22 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Babcock Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Time has a way of slipping by especially when we are younger and as we get older we realize how fast it really goes. Wonderful write. love phyl
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 9:47 AM
Thank you, Phyllis! :)
Leiser Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 8:16 AM
This is brilliant and entertaining, too, Kim! Loved this! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Thank you so much, Laura xx
Ellison Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 5:13 AM
A beauty... a winner in my mind! Loved it! Happy Jack! XOX
Ellison Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 9:21 AM
SWEET!!!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Thank you so much XOX back at ya, Happy Jack!
Pandit Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 4:52 AM
Delightful, original take on the theme, Kim. Much enjoyed the journey through life and time reading your wisdom words. Excellent write.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Thank you, my dear friend!
Romios Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 1:51 AM
Kim, a beauty,
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 4:06 AM
Thank you, Pangie! Wonderful to see you on here. Hope you are healing quickly. xx
Buhagiar Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 1:20 AM
We ae born and time helps us especially through our mothers. How sad when we lose them. Great emotional poem. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 4:06 AM
So sad to lose them than alas we must truly grow up. God bless you, Victor!
Bayles Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 9:18 PM
Kim, I like how you play with time in this poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 4:07 AM
Thank you so much, Mike! :)
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