Remains of Time

How did it get late so soon? It’s night before it’s afternoon. December is here before it’s June. My goodness how the time has flewn. How did it get so late so soon?  — Dr. Seuss

REMAINS OF TIME

the moment i landed,
time, my time, started.
meant nothing when i cried,
when i babbled,
when i fell,
when mom kissed my un-wells.

then i was educated
and time moved slowly
as i stared out the schoolhouse window,
waited for Pavlov’s bell…

in time,
time was fun,
floating on a ship—
friendship, kinship,
proverbial ship.

time took a turn
as kin withered
and stoned
or decomposed in windblown ashes…

time taps me in places—
head, nose, shoulder bones.
i shudder…i shun,
in wonderment i run.

time finds me
in tears…on my knees,
   beholden
to clarity.

i stare in its face—
its remains.

11/7/2021
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Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 11/11/2021 9:54:00 AM
Kim, wonderful writing and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "T" Contest, like the quote too ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2021 10:12:00 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 11/10/2021 3:32:00 PM
Yes! You have really captured the essence of our human experience with time, Kim. Wonderful! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2021 6:30:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 11/10/2021 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "REMAINS OF TIME" is a creative story/write. Time is a funny thing. Have a blessed day.....................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2021 6:30:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 11/10/2021 6:37:00 AM
Great work as usual. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2021 6:29:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/8/2021 9:13:00 PM
Time is a trickster.... ! It pleases, annoys, baffles and stupyfies. You have captured all its erratic phases !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2021 5:22:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 11/8/2021 8:38:00 AM
Time has a way of slipping by especially when we are younger and as we get older we realize how fast it really goes. Wonderful write. love phyl
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2021 9:47:00 AM
Thank you, Phyllis! :)
Date: 11/8/2021 8:16:00 AM
This is brilliant and entertaining, too, Kim! Loved this! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2021 8:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Laura xx
Date: 11/8/2021 5:13:00 AM
A beauty... a winner in my mind! Loved it! Happy Jack! XOX
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/8/2021 9:21:00 AM
SWEET!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2021 7:44:00 AM
Thank you so much XOX back at ya, Happy Jack!
Date: 11/8/2021 4:52:00 AM
Delightful, original take on the theme, Kim. Much enjoyed the journey through life and time reading your wisdom words. Excellent write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2021 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, my dear friend!
Date: 11/8/2021 1:51:00 AM
Kim, a beauty,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2021 4:06:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie! Wonderful to see you on here. Hope you are healing quickly. xx
Date: 11/8/2021 1:20:00 AM
We ae born and time helps us especially through our mothers. How sad when we lose them. Great emotional poem. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2021 4:06:00 AM
So sad to lose them than alas we must truly grow up. God bless you, Victor!
Date: 11/7/2021 9:18:00 PM
Kim, I like how you play with time in this poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2021 4:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mike! :)
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