Rem

Rapid eye movement helps restore the dreaming mind, regenerating and recharging its matter. Relax and prepare to recall subconscious realms, revisiting wonders. 4-15-2021 Pleiades R Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/19/2021 8:08:00 PM

Juliet, I love my dream world and I adore your poem. Beautifully done with wonderfully flowing lines of imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2021 4:37:00 PM

I adored this the first time i read it Juliet, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/19/2021 2:53:00 PM

Juliet, you portrayed your title well and your words flowed fluently. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/16/2021 12:52:00 PM

Haven't looked into these 'Pleiades' contests, but your 'R' entry is a whale more soothing and relaxing than 'Readin', Writin,' and 'Rithmetic! G.L. in the contest, Julia, and Happy Weekend! :) gw

Jan Allison

Date: 4/16/2021 3:54:00 AM

My hubby's head can hit the pillow and he's in the land of nod, takes me ages to get to sleep but i do get some quality dreams, great write on REM:-) hugs Jan x

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/15/2021 9:46:00 PM

Ah, rem sleep is indeed so restorative, lovely line 'recall subconscious realms', good luck in the contest! (I don't have a clear idea yet on if I will do one for this or not)