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Rely On Affection

A striking canvass of the night sky. Wept as the moon shone brightly. The mistiness provides a sense of calm. An upheaval arose amid the silence. Smooth orbs droop toward us. Such a fight about shiny wonts. Overshadowing the area of view. This brief pause was quickly ended. As the moon and stars fade. Night softens the shadows. Sweet loving states glow zealously. Tonight the darlings emerge. Filling hearts with unwavering trust. This evening, a higher smile. Reminds us to trust affection.
1St PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: March 30, 2022 Sponsored by: Brian Strand A BRIAN STRAND STANDARD Poetry Contest
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Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 3:52 AM
I have quickly read your winning entry in Brian's contest and found it worthy of its honor. Congrats. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations, Sotto! Love: As the moon and stars fade./Night softens the shadows.
Alex Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 1:09 AM
"Reminds us to trust affection" - Wow! Congratulations!
George Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 8:44 PM
Back to your poem with congratulations on your win dear Lasaad !
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sotto, I enjoyed reading the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Wolf Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 6:01 PM
This is beautiful, LaSaad: Picture perfect! Joy and Light, Gershon
Pandit Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 5:51 AM
Well painted night sky, Lasaad. A striking canvas indeed!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 12:42 AM
Your vision of life is so full of imagery. Made me read your poem again. Well done.
George Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 9:16 PM
Such a lovely scene you have painted, dear Lasaad ! The serene beauty of the evening and the soft shadows of the night give a sense of calm to the mind.... !
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