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A striking canvass of the night sky. Wept as the moon shone brightly. The mistiness provides a sense of calm. An upheaval arose amid the silence. Smooth orbs droop toward us. Such a fight about shiny wonts. Overshadowing the area of view. This brief pause was quickly ended. As the moon and stars fade. Night softens the shadows. Sweet loving states glow zealously. Tonight the darlings emerge. Filling hearts with unwavering trust. This evening, a higher smile. Reminds us to trust affection.
1St PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: March 30, 2022 Sponsored by: Brian Strand A BRIAN STRAND STANDARD Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/9/2022 3:52:00 AM
I have quickly read your winning entry in Brian's contest and found it worthy of its honor. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 4/5/2022 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations, Sotto! Love: As the moon and stars fade./Night softens the shadows.
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Date: 4/5/2022 1:09:00 AM
"Reminds us to trust affection" - Wow! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/4/2022 8:44:00 PM
Back to your poem with congratulations on your win dear Lasaad !
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Date: 4/4/2022 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sotto, I enjoyed reading the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/31/2022 6:01:00 PM
This is beautiful, LaSaad: Picture perfect! Joy and Light, Gershon
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Date: 3/31/2022 5:51:00 AM
Well painted night sky, Lasaad. A striking canvas indeed!
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Date: 3/31/2022 12:42:00 AM
Your vision of life is so full of imagery. Made me read your poem again. Well done.
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Date: 3/30/2022 9:16:00 PM
Such a lovely scene you have painted, dear Lasaad ! The serene beauty of the evening and the soft shadows of the night give a sense of calm to the mind.... !
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