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Reluctant Morning

Midnight's candle fades As morning dawns With an eye of cold gray. My own eyes Are still awash In the dreams of the night My ears Are still full Of the echoing whispers of sleep I want to cling To the warm shadows And to my soft pillow It is a reluctant morning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/5/2008 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. I like the flow of the words and the message. The theme is consistent with the title, and it flows throughout the poem quite well. I know the feeling of not wanting to get out of bed when the soft pillow feels good. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/4/2008 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2008 8:14:00 PM
Made me smile, who hasn't been there? Congratulations on being featured! Trudy
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Date: 9/26/2008 7:42:00 PM
Exactly what I felt this morning. Congrats for being featured :) Teri
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Date: 9/26/2008 5:51:00 AM
Good work. Congrats. I feel this way damn near every morning. Love, Daver
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Date: 9/24/2008 11:15:00 AM
Snuggling is definitely underrated ... smile ... What a wonderful write here Steven and a well-deserved selection to be featured this week! Congratulations.
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Date: 9/24/2008 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations Steven on the featuring of "Reluctant Morning." Vince
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Date: 9/22/2008 8:13:00 AM
Sometimes just kicking back in bed watching cartoons with my wife and daughter is the greatest moments of all - congrats on being featured and God Bless
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Date: 9/22/2008 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations Steve on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/2/2008 5:25:00 AM
Wow, do I know this feeling a little too well. You are so talented, wish you posted more. Many thanks Steve for your thoughtful comment. Love, Shar
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