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*Image of I'm Letting Go So I Can Be Free by Pinterest. Relinquish A blossoming beauty breathes beyond bothersome barbs beneath, A humming harbinger hurriedly handling honey hallmarked its host, A sunshine stretch steamingly of bodies special slicked spilt skins, A solitary star secludes a sky set love's sights are surely smitten. 2022 July 20 *2nd Place* A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 July 22

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/24/2022 4:16:00 AM

Aloha William, Congratulations on winning Second place in this premiere contest with this marvelous poem. Blessings and Mahalo, xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/24/2022 9:09:00 AM

Mahalo, Connie, seeing alliterations is one of Brian's likes, eh, why not, but didn't expect it to soar as it did my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/22/2022 8:48:00 PM

"love's sights are surely smitten" - Plenty of alliterations too. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/22/2022 10:14:00 PM

Thank you, Christuraj, there's much kindness that you've shared my friend, Aloha~William

Valsa George

Date: 7/22/2022 8:05:00 PM

Crisp and catchy images ! Enjoyed this highly alliterative poem ! Congratulations William on your podium win !

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/22/2022 8:37:00 PM

Valsa, such immense joy bringeth satisfaction my friend, Aloha~William

Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/22/2022 7:47:00 PM

Remarkable alliteration that demonstrates creativity + thoughtful reflection for the reader. Congratulations! Brian

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/22/2022 8:34:00 PM

Thank you, Brian, for your generous sentiments my friend, Aloha~William

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/22/2022 5:00:00 PM

Congrats to you, friend. Many blessings and prayers, Love, Gina

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/22/2022 5:48:00 PM

Tender mercy be yours always, Gina, blessings truly my friend, Aloha~William

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/22/2022 12:26:00 PM

I'm writing to congratulate you on winning the contest. With this wondrous poem.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/22/2022 1:01:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad, surprised to gauge so in Brian's contest. Thanks again my friend, Aloha~William

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/21/2022 6:53:00 PM

Wondrous wordplay, especially like 'humming harbinger' and 'solitary star' - very evocative, hope it's a win for you!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/21/2022 7:43:00 PM

Thanks a million, Michelle, for the boost, acknowledgments, and highlights my friend, Aloha~William