William Kelii Kekaula Poet Alliteration

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A blossoming beauty breathes
beyond bothersome barbs beneath,
A humming harbinger hurriedly
handling honey hallmarked its host,
A sunshine stretch steamingly
of bodies special slicked spilt skins,
A solitary star secludes a sky
set love's sights are surely smitten.
     
2022 July 20
*2nd Place*
A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 July 22

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Connie Marcum Wong July 24, 2022 at 4:16 AM Aloha William, Congratulations on winning Second place in this premiere contest with this marvelous poem. Blessings and Mahalo, xxoo William Kelii Kekaula July 24, 2022 at 9:09 AM Mahalo, Connie, seeing alliterations is one of Brian's likes, eh, why not, but didn't expect it to soar as it did my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex July 22, 2022 at 8:48 PM "love's sights are surely smitten" - Plenty of alliterations too. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula July 22, 2022 at 10:14 PM Thank you, Christuraj, there's much kindness that you've shared my friend, Aloha~William

Valsa George July 22, 2022 at 8:05 PM Crisp and catchy images ! Enjoyed this highly alliterative poem ! Congratulations William on your podium win ! William Kelii Kekaula July 22, 2022 at 8:37 PM Valsa, such immense joy bringeth satisfaction my friend, Aloha~William

Brian Sambourne July 22, 2022 at 7:47 PM Remarkable alliteration that demonstrates creativity + thoughtful reflection for the reader. Congratulations! Brian William Kelii Kekaula July 22, 2022 at 8:34 PM Thank you, Brian, for your generous sentiments my friend, Aloha~William

Regina Mcintosh July 22, 2022 at 5:00 PM Congrats to you, friend. Many blessings and prayers, Love, Gina William Kelii Kekaula July 22, 2022 at 5:48 PM Tender mercy be yours always, Gina, blessings truly my friend, Aloha~William

Sotto Poet July 22, 2022 at 12:26 PM I'm writing to congratulate you on winning the contest. With this wondrous poem. William Kelii Kekaula July 22, 2022 at 1:01 PM Thank you, Lasaad, surprised to gauge so in Brian's contest. Thanks again my friend, Aloha~William

Michelle Faulkner July 21, 2022 at 6:53 PM Wondrous wordplay, especially like 'humming harbinger' and 'solitary star' - very evocative, hope it's a win for you! William Kelii Kekaula July 21, 2022 at 7:43 PM Thanks a million, Michelle, for the boost, acknowledgments, and highlights my friend, Aloha~William