Relentless Time

When very young, we blindly may dismiss	
Our elders’ admonitions about Time,
Or future grief or pain, for in that bliss 
Who recks of illness, death, mischance, or crime?

And in our prime, with life’s distracting needs,
With open, seeing eyes, we still are blind:
We go our ways, and yet, while Time proceeds,
The passing hours are rarely brought to mind.

But when we're spared into our elder years,
We recognize the truth we used to mock:
That whether youth was fraught with joy or tears,
There is no hope of winding back the clock.

Use well the days, because with every breath,
Relentless Time will sweep us all toward death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/28/2018 5:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful with a great message. Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/29/2018 10:53:00 AM
Thank you very much, Susan, for your kind words!
Date: 7/27/2018 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, JP. I enjoyed reading this well written sonnet. Hugs Eve
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J P Marmaro
Date: 7/29/2018 10:59:00 AM
Dear Eve, I do so very much appreciate your kind and encouraging comment!
Date: 7/27/2018 11:19:00 AM
I so agree with your wise message in this winning sonnet. My oldest daughter now in her early 40's is beginning to feel time speeding by. I tell her to hike, vacation and do things she may no longer be able to do while she is still young enough to enjoy them. Congratulations on your fine win!
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J P Marmaro
Date: 7/29/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie: it is a lesson I myself have been learning all too poignantly. Also a hard one to write about without sounding trite or bathetic.
Date: 7/27/2018 6:17:00 AM
A good reminder for the start of a new day. Thank you and congratulations.
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J P Marmaro
Date: 7/29/2018 11:02:00 AM
I thank you also, Wendy, for your kind words.
Date: 7/20/2018 3:39:00 PM
This is so very true, J.P., unfortunately people don't realize it until they are no longer young. I try to convey this same message to the younger generation myself. Nicely done my friend. All the best. John
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J P Marmaro
Date: 7/29/2018 11:04:00 AM
And John, thank you so much for your encouraging comments. It reminds me of the old saying (variously attributed): "All young men think old men are fools. All old men KNOW young men are!"
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