Jeanne Mcgee Poet Free verse

Released

I will caress your skin and ease the tension from your brow

              ...Float serenely upon my back as I cradle your desires

Slowly you unlock your chained heart from the miseries of your world

              You are released from your despair as gently as a mothers' touch



Taken from:  Shaman's Grotto 6-10-2019
Arbitrium Divisa 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Gregory R Barden

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Silent One July 20, 2019 at 6:06 AM This is beautiful...Four great lines...

Caren Krutsinger July 20, 2019 at 1:49 AM I pictured a man releasing all of his tension, for he knew he was now safe.

Mystic Rose Rose July 19, 2019 at 5:47 PM Your poetry is beautiful to the senses. xo Jeanne Mcgee July 19, 2019 at 6:59 PM xoxo

Michelle Faulkner July 19, 2019 at 5:26 PM This is the epitome of healing love releasing the pain, best of luck in the contest, Jeanne. Jeanne Mcgee July 19, 2019 at 6:59 PM Thanks so much MIchelle.

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2019 at 4:20 PM a wonderful entry for the contest. Good luck for a win. Jeanne Mcgee July 19, 2019 at 5:18 PM xoxox

Arturo Michael July 19, 2019 at 9:56 AM Soft to the eyes tender to the touch...A lovely write... Jeanne Mcgee July 19, 2019 at 12:13 PM I'm rather liking soft to the eyes tender to the touch! Thanks Arturo.