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The soft music plays
Lifting my spirit so high
Everything is lighter
I dance in the air
I am released to be free
As if the wind let me go
Moving with the notes
Of a song merging with life
I am at peace while I float
Nothing can reach me
In a song where my heart rests
Many times broken, healing

Heidi Sands

11/10/18

Choka - 5-7-7, 5-7-7..

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Date: 11/11/2018 6:27:00 PM
Beautiful! Can feel the lifting, floating peace. Weightless, unencumbered. Love it Heidi, a favorite!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/11/2018 6:43:00 PM
Hi Sandra. Wonderful to hear. Thank you. I am happy you consider it a favorite :)
Date: 11/11/2018 2:14:00 PM
Uplifting dearest, Heidi! Loved it!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/11/2018 6:42:00 PM
Thank you! Great to hear :) I appreciate your comment .
Date: 11/10/2018 3:59:00 PM
i revel at your free- flowing write, heidi,,, i like!..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/10/2018 4:14:00 PM
Thank you Nette. Your comments make me smile. Thank you :)
Date: 11/10/2018 1:53:00 PM
Nothing like good music or a song to lift your spirits . Tom.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/10/2018 1:59:00 PM
That is right Tom. Thank you :)
Date: 11/10/2018 12:41:00 PM
Float on..good day today with sunshine ( a bit cold)..enjoyed the upbeat vibes in the end.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/10/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Vijay We had snow overnight. Windy now. Enjoy the day :)
Date: 11/10/2018 12:31:00 PM
Hope the song brings healing Heidi..best wishes..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/10/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thank you very much Joseph :)

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