Release

Breaking the silence the storm begins to churn 
darkness creeps upon my being from every direction 
A lone lion stands at the doorway awaiting my breath 
the yellow eyes of evil staring at the shadow of a former man 
I remember the feeling of fear from when i was a young boy
Now nothing inside flinches as the predator draws near
I feel the breeze no longer move as the floor creaks beneath bloody paws 
the taste of the last cigeratte runs across my tounge 
I close my eyes as the shadow envelopes myself
The storm no longer burns through my body
Instead the peaceful retreat of nothing stays 
The yellow eyes at the door still waiting for my breath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 13, 2015 at 6:28 PM
Hi Robert, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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August 13, 2015 at 1:11 AM
Robert, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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