Get Your Premium Membership

Relaxed Poet

day breaks house wakes bright dawn last yawn hot brew on cue dew dries time flies shade trees light breeze relaxed muse taxed pen’s still thoughts nil nap calls pad falls snoozer loser muse fled deadhead June 7, 2022 entered in A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Contest Placed 2nd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/27/2022 4:58:00 AM
Nice coinage of rhyming with just two words for each line and it contains meaning also. You truly deserve the second praise!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/14/2022 4:47:00 PM
I love your poem! Describes me to a T:)
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/15/2022 7:06:00 AM
Me too! Thanks so much, Ann! Janice
Date: 6/14/2022 1:03:00 PM
What would we do without our muse dear poet, thank you for sharing this beauty, congrats on your win All the best, hugs xo
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/15/2022 7:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mystic! Janice
Date: 6/13/2022 9:43:00 PM
This is indeed a lovely set of footles with beautiful rhyming. Hearty Congratulations on your great win, Janice !
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/14/2022 4:34:00 AM
Thanks so much, Valsa. Janice
Date: 6/13/2022 7:51:00 PM
I like the rhyme in this great poem of yours. Congratulations on your award, Janice.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/14/2022 4:34:00 AM
Thanks so much, Marius. Janice
Date: 6/13/2022 1:10:00 PM
The depths of my chuckle are well earned, Janice, nicely done and with my compliments, also, I am grateful for your visit my friend, Aloha~William
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/13/2022 2:27:00 PM
Thanks a million, William. Janice
Date: 6/13/2022 8:03:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/13/2022 10:03:00 AM
Thanks so much, Beata. Janice
Date: 6/13/2022 4:14:00 AM
Great Footle, Janice. Congratulations on your super win.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/13/2022 10:03:00 AM
Thanks so much, Elaine! Janice
Date: 6/13/2022 1:32:00 AM
Wow, Love these gems, Janice, don't know about 6 and 7, there is much in your muse..
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/13/2022 10:04:00 AM
Thanks so much, Harry. Janice
Date: 6/10/2022 6:56:00 PM
I love footles Janice. This is one of the best I have read. Your poem is so creative and I really identify with it. I have to Fave it! I hope Brian sees this as the winner it is. Blessings xxoo
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/12/2022 4:54:00 AM
Connie, you have made my day. Thank you! Janice
Date: 6/9/2022 5:32:00 AM
LOL…sounds about right! The morning is hopeful especially with a cup in hand.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/9/2022 5:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim. I have literally fallen sound asleep in the middle of writing a poem! Janice
Date: 6/8/2022 6:35:00 PM
I really like this. Did it win? Often he prefers footles!!
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/8/2022 8:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. The contest isn't over. I hope . . . ! Janice
Date: 6/8/2022 11:51:00 AM
Thanks for the laugh! Aloha!
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/8/2022 8:26:00 PM
Thank YOU, Rico. Janice
Date: 6/8/2022 5:03:00 AM
Great images invoked in every pair. All the best, Janice.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/8/2022 5:55:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 6/8/2022 12:25:00 AM
Superbly crafted Footle! Why chase the muse, let it flow in to us!
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/8/2022 5:56:00 AM
Well, mine's a bit dodgy! LOL! Thanks so much, Unseeking Seeker. Janice
Date: 6/7/2022 6:44:00 PM
Love love love this fun poem Janice! Debx
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/7/2022 7:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Deb. Janice

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry