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Relaxed Poet

day breaks house wakes bright dawn last yawn hot brew on cue dew dries time flies shade trees light breeze relaxed muse taxed pen’s still thoughts nil nap calls pad falls snoozer loser muse fled deadhead June 7, 2022 entered in A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Contest Placed 2nd

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Mv Venkataraman

Date: 6/27/2022 4:58:00 AM

Nice coinage of rhyming with just two words for each line and it contains meaning also. You truly deserve the second praise!

Ann Peck

Date: 6/14/2022 4:47:00 PM

I love your poem! Describes me to a T:)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/15/2022 7:06:00 AM

Me too! Thanks so much, Ann! Janice

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/14/2022 1:03:00 PM

What would we do without our muse dear poet, thank you for sharing this beauty, congrats on your win All the best, hugs xo

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/15/2022 7:06:00 AM

Thanks so much, Mystic! Janice

Valsa George

Date: 6/13/2022 9:43:00 PM

This is indeed a lovely set of footles with beautiful rhyming. Hearty Congratulations on your great win, Janice !

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/14/2022 4:34:00 AM

Thanks so much, Valsa. Janice

Marius Alexandru

Date: 6/13/2022 7:51:00 PM

I like the rhyme in this great poem of yours. Congratulations on your award, Janice.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/14/2022 4:34:00 AM

Thanks so much, Marius. Janice

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/13/2022 1:10:00 PM

The depths of my chuckle are well earned, Janice, nicely done and with my compliments, also, I am grateful for your visit my friend, Aloha~William

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/13/2022 2:27:00 PM

Thanks a million, William. Janice

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/13/2022 8:03:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/13/2022 10:03:00 AM

Thanks so much, Beata. Janice

Elaine George

Date: 6/13/2022 4:14:00 AM

Great Footle, Janice. Congratulations on your super win.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/13/2022 10:03:00 AM

Thanks so much, Elaine! Janice

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/13/2022 1:32:00 AM

Wow, Love these gems, Janice, don't know about 6 and 7, there is much in your muse..

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/13/2022 10:04:00 AM

Thanks so much, Harry. Janice

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/10/2022 6:56:00 PM

I love footles Janice. This is one of the best I have read. Your poem is so creative and I really identify with it. I have to Fave it! I hope Brian sees this as the winner it is. Blessings xxoo

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/12/2022 4:54:00 AM

Connie, you have made my day. Thank you! Janice