Janice Canerdy Poet Footle

Relaxed Poet

day breaks
	house wakes

	bright dawn
	last yawn

	hot brew
	on cue

	dew dries 
	time flies

	shade trees
	light breeze
	
	relaxed
	muse taxed

	pen’s still
	thoughts nil

	nap calls
	pad falls

	snoozer
	loser

	muse fled
	deadhead


June 7, 2022
entered in A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Contest       Placed 2nd

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Mv Venkataraman June 27, 2022 at 4:58 AM Nice coinage of rhyming with just two words for each line and it contains meaning also. You truly deserve the second praise!

Ann Peck June 14, 2022 at 4:47 PM I love your poem! Describes me to a T:) Janice Canerdy June 15, 2022 at 7:06 AM Me too! Thanks so much, Ann! Janice

Mystic Rose Rose June 14, 2022 at 1:03 PM What would we do without our muse dear poet, thank you for sharing this beauty, congrats on your win All the best, hugs xo Janice Canerdy June 15, 2022 at 7:06 AM Thanks so much, Mystic! Janice

Valsa George June 13, 2022 at 9:43 PM This is indeed a lovely set of footles with beautiful rhyming. Hearty Congratulations on your great win, Janice ! Janice Canerdy June 14, 2022 at 4:34 AM Thanks so much, Valsa. Janice

Marius Alexandru June 13, 2022 at 7:51 PM I like the rhyme in this great poem of yours. Congratulations on your award, Janice. Janice Canerdy June 14, 2022 at 4:34 AM Thanks so much, Marius. Janice

William Kelii Kekaula June 13, 2022 at 1:10 PM The depths of my chuckle are well earned, Janice, nicely done and with my compliments, also, I am grateful for your visit my friend, Aloha~William Janice Canerdy June 13, 2022 at 2:27 PM Thanks a million, William. Janice

Beata Agustin June 13, 2022 at 8:03 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Janice Canerdy June 13, 2022 at 10:03 AM Thanks so much, Beata. Janice

Elaine George June 13, 2022 at 4:14 AM Great Footle, Janice. Congratulations on your super win. Janice Canerdy June 13, 2022 at 10:03 AM Thanks so much, Elaine! Janice

Harry Horsman June 13, 2022 at 1:32 AM Wow, Love these gems, Janice, don't know about 6 and 7, there is much in your muse.. Janice Canerdy June 13, 2022 at 10:04 AM Thanks so much, Harry. Janice

Connie Marcum Wong June 10, 2022 at 6:56 PM I love footles Janice. This is one of the best I have read. Your poem is so creative and I really identify with it. I have to Fave it! I hope Brian sees this as the winner it is. Blessings xxoo Janice Canerdy June 12, 2022 at 4:54 AM Connie, you have made my day. Thank you! Janice

Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2022 at 5:32 AM LOL…sounds about right! The morning is hopeful especially with a cup in hand. Janice Canerdy June 9, 2022 at 5:47 AM Thanks so much, Kim. I have literally fallen sound asleep in the middle of writing a poem! Janice

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2022 at 6:35 PM I really like this. Did it win? Often he prefers footles!! Janice Canerdy June 8, 2022 at 8:26 PM Thanks so much, Andrea. The contest isn't over. I hope . . . ! Janice

Rico Leffanta June 8, 2022 at 11:51 AM Thanks for the laugh! Aloha! Janice Canerdy June 8, 2022 at 8:26 PM Thank YOU, Rico. Janice

Vijay Pandit June 8, 2022 at 5:03 AM Great images invoked in every pair. All the best, Janice. Janice Canerdy June 8, 2022 at 5:55 AM Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice

Unseeking Seeker June 8, 2022 at 12:25 AM Superbly crafted Footle! Why chase the muse, let it flow in to us! Janice Canerdy June 8, 2022 at 5:56 AM Well, mine's a bit dodgy! LOL! Thanks so much, Unseeking Seeker. Janice

Deb M June 7, 2022 at 6:44 PM Love love love this fun poem Janice! Debx Janice Canerdy June 7, 2022 at 7:54 PM Thanks so much, Deb. Janice