Eve Roper Poet Dodoitsu

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Relax, Let It All Go- Syllables of Wisdom 2

Relax, Let It All Go


calm ocean dance, soothing scene  

seaweed scent breeze, seagulls sing,

whispers of sounds and dreams drift

as time sweeps away


1/13/2016


Poetry Contest SYLLABLES OF WISDOM 2  
 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Poet Destroyer A January 26, 2016 at 10:35 PM Eve, Nice winning poem, Love - LINDA -

Skat A January 18, 2016 at 9:14 AM Eve, Congratulations on your win. ---SKAT :)

Anisha Dutta January 17, 2016 at 11:39 PM Congrats Eve to win. Hugs. Anisha

Sandra Haight January 17, 2016 at 4:31 PM Hi, Eve, such lovely relaxing imagery of the beautiful beach! We visit the NJ Shore, once every year, and you've described it so well. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars January 17, 2016 at 1:46 PM Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest! *smiles* -luloo

Paul Callus January 17, 2016 at 12:00 PM What an appealing and relaxing scene, Eve! No wonder you are a painter:) Congratulations on yet another lovely win! hugs // paul

Hansteven Selfa January 17, 2016 at 8:04 AM Congratulations on your placement in the SYLLABLES OF WISDOM 2 contest! You deserve it!

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2016 at 6:53 PM I love this. I wish i loved by the sea! Eve Roper January 15, 2016 at 8:43 PM Thank you, Andrea, I wish I did too, the West Coast :)

Eric Boddie January 15, 2016 at 8:28 AM it seems the time given is never enough....for every deadline, some are so tough....anxiety and stress will invade our hopes and dreams....but if we just relax and remain calm, we can conquer anything....Love this carefree selection eve....;) Eve Roper January 15, 2016 at 8:44 PM Thank you, Eric, always enjoy your visits :) Hugs Eve

Connie Marcum Wong January 14, 2016 at 10:17 PM This is lovely Eve. I am ready to chill! Cheers, Connie Eve Roper January 15, 2016 at 8:42 PM Thank you, Connie, living in Hawaii you already have the luxury :)

White Sage January 13, 2016 at 4:17 PM lovely piece Eve...good luck in the contest Eve Roper January 15, 2016 at 8:40 PM Thank you, White :)

Jan Allison January 13, 2016 at 4:11 PM Lovely imagery and alliteration. Good luck in the contest Eve:-) hugs Jan xx Eve Roper January 13, 2016 at 4:16 PM Thank you, Jan, :) Hugs dear friend

Beautiful Scars January 13, 2016 at 3:49 PM Beautiful Eve..good luck it will do well in the contest *smiles* Eve Roper January 13, 2016 at 4:16 PM Thank you, Laura, :) Hugs dear friend

Nette Onclaud January 13, 2016 at 1:53 PM a relaxed mind sees things clearly... superb message, eve.. huggs Eve Roper January 13, 2016 at 4:15 PM Thank you, Nette, :) I always enjoyed the walks on the ocean beach so serene.