Rekindling a Journey

Wind swept leaves fluttering in the breeze 
Walking on crunchy, bronzed and orange leaves 
Peaceful places leave traces of natures effects 
Bare trees hung with their dull bark, stripped of their objects
Scurrying across the ground, a chipmunk rushed to hide  
Horse hoof marks pressed into the mounds- 
Of softened soil, where they reside
Evening slowly falls around the woods,
As we walk with chatter, past the buttonwoods 
Leggy pines drop off their needles 
Blanketing the floor with an apple cedar rust 
Their fragrant scent mixes with the must
Now direction could easily be lost, as the woods all look the same 
A faint chirp of a bird calling out a name
Broken twigs and a hole where animals dug 
Carefully, I watch my position
Now, shadows lurk about like a magician 
The mind plays tricks on my intuition
The slightest bang and bow of the trees 
Knocking together as they squeeze
We walk hand and hand, while nature- 
Completes her expertise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/26/2008 4:10:00 AM
A nice image laden poem, laura! loveKristin
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Date: 10/26/2008 12:17:00 AM
Lovely imagery Laura.Rgds brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 10/25/2008 8:48:00 PM
Hi Laura What a beautiful walk through the woods! I felt like I was walking right beside you flling up all my senses amongst natures lively landscape. I just love your visionary expression within this awesome write!This reminds me here of home about a month ago. Such a beautiful time of year. Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/25/2008 6:38:00 PM
Laura this poem is amazingly wonderful - Such a beautiful experience described in a wonderful way - Sounds like a truly beautiful walk - God Bless
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Date: 10/25/2008 5:59:00 PM
How incredibly lucky you are to be able to take such a walk. Your imagery was intriguing as the woods hold many secrets and mysteries. You seemed cautious yet excited and pleased to be amidst such spellbinding nature. Loved this 'walk' with you. Love, Shar
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