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Rekindled Passions

How dreams of our youth now tiptoe Alluring endearment memories impart Enthralled in ardent past still aglow How dreams of our youth now tiptoe Rekindling passions thwarted long ago Enamored in rhythms of your heart How dreams of our youth now tiptoe Alluring endearment memories impart May 21, 2021 Placed 4th: Try a triolet poetry contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/28/2022 12:24:00 PM

My favorite line: How dreams of our youth now tiptoe! :)

Valsa George

Date: 11/22/2021 5:11:00 AM

I am learning new poetic forms ! You are adept in all forms Vijay !

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 6/29/2021 2:55:00 PM

Well written triolet Vijay, congrats on your win! ~Anna

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2021 1:43:00 PM

Back with my congrats! Very well done, Vijay.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/13/2021 11:41:00 AM

An amazing triolet, Vijay:-) It's easy to see why it won Kim's contest!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/31/2021 6:33:00 AM

Memories and rekindling of passion unite to inspire a very lovely Triolet, Vijay. Congratulation son your fine win. Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/30/2021 12:19:00 PM

These are not so easy to write but you have done a very good job. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/28/2021 10:22:00 AM

A deep, thought provoking poem Vijay , Your poetry is like a garden of lfowers, it blooms and blossoms all the time more and more - great creativity here excellent poetry. A FAVE! Blessings, Jennifer.

Judy Ball

Date: 5/26/2021 11:29:00 AM

Dreams of good times and young love gone by.Well done Vijay. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2021 11:40:00 AM

Thank you Judy--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/26/2021 10:25:00 AM

Dreams of youth like a gentle breeze they waltz through our memories, making for great poetry and stories, Have a great day dear friend :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2021 11:40:00 AM

Much appreciate Vienna--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/26/2021 8:45:00 AM

A wonderful triolet, Vijay, congratulations on your win:) love the "enamored line":)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2021 11:39:00 AM

Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 5/26/2021 6:40:00 AM

Beautiful Triolet Vijay Pandit, and congrats for a well-deserving win, and yes, many thanks for wishing for my BD

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2021 7:00:00 AM

Delighted by your visit and comments--much appreciate--many thanks.

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/25/2021 8:08:00 PM

Vijay, congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2021 6:58:00 AM

Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/25/2021 12:59:00 PM

I am back to congratulate you on your win for this lovely triolet Vijay. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2021 6:58:00 AM

Much appreciate Connie--many thanks.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/25/2021 11:42:00 AM

What a remarkable picture of lost love on "tiptoe!" I am always inspired by your word usage and crisp, creative images. Congratulations on your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2021 6:58:00 AM

Glad you could visit with your kind remarks, Sam--much appreciate--many thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/25/2021 11:31:00 AM

Hi Vijay, Your well-written triolet took me down memory lane. It caused me to revisit memories so long ago. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day my friend:-)Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2021 6:57:00 AM

Much appreciate, Alexis--many thanks.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/25/2021 10:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful triolet write. Good memories are the best. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2021 6:57:00 AM

Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/24/2021 3:15:00 PM

Sweet dreams are made of these, like the old song says, :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/25/2021 8:00:00 AM

Much appreciate Vienna--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/24/2021 10:03:00 AM

Another beauty, Vijay--so moving and expressive. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/24/2021 10:13:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/24/2021 5:26:00 AM

WOW!! This is most beautiful and yeah one of the best! I love it, and a winner for me :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/24/2021 6:48:00 AM

So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate, Akkina. Glad to see you again.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/24/2021 3:47:00 AM

Superb triolet, Vijay:-) Definitely one of the best I've read for the contest. An obvious winner to me!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/24/2021 6:48:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your voice of confidence.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/23/2021 9:35:00 AM

I've never tried this form Vijay but after seeing how beautiful yours is, I have been inspired ! Good Luck!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/23/2021 12:25:00 PM

Looking forward to reading yours soon Mike. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/23/2021 7:52:00 AM

How elegantly you expressed your deep reflections! Young love's beautiful sensation and lovely experiences, how enthralling the whole sensation is! My very. Best wishes for the contest Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/23/2021 12:24:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Lassad--many thanks for the kind remarks.

Joseph May

Date: 5/22/2021 8:26:00 PM

I like the second line of the refrain, Very nicely penned Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/23/2021 12:24:00 PM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/22/2021 5:11:00 PM

Very well done Vijay, a winner in my circle of success poems, :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/23/2021 12:24:00 PM

Much appreciate, Vienna--many thanks.