Vijay Pandit Poet Triolet

Rekindled Passions

How dreams of our youth now tiptoe
Alluring endearment memories impart
Enthralled in ardent past still aglow
How dreams of our youth now tiptoe
Rekindling passions thwarted long ago
Enamored in rhythms of your heart
How dreams of our youth now tiptoe
Alluring endearment memories impart

May 21, 2021
Placed 4th: Try a triolet poetry contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Kim Rodrigues March 28, 2022 at 12:24 PM My favorite line: How dreams of our youth now tiptoe! :)

Valsa George November 22, 2021 at 5:11 AM I am learning new poetic forms ! You are adept in all forms Vijay !

Anna Marie Kaianah June 29, 2021 at 2:55 PM Well written triolet Vijay, congrats on your win! ~Anna

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2021 at 1:43 PM Back with my congrats! Very well done, Vijay.

Edward Ibeh June 13, 2021 at 11:41 AM An amazing triolet, Vijay:-) It's easy to see why it won Kim's contest!

Paul Callus May 31, 2021 at 6:33 AM Memories and rekindling of passion unite to inspire a very lovely Triolet, Vijay. Congratulation son your fine win. Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick May 30, 2021 at 12:19 PM These are not so easy to write but you have done a very good job. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos May 28, 2021 at 10:22 AM A deep, thought provoking poem Vijay , Your poetry is like a garden of lfowers, it blooms and blossoms all the time more and more - great creativity here excellent poetry. A FAVE! Blessings, Jennifer.

Judy Ball May 26, 2021 at 11:29 AM Dreams of good times and young love gone by.Well done Vijay. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit May 26, 2021 at 11:40 AM Thank you Judy--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose May 26, 2021 at 10:25 AM Dreams of youth like a gentle breeze they waltz through our memories, making for great poetry and stories, Have a great day dear friend :) Vijay Pandit May 26, 2021 at 11:40 AM Much appreciate Vienna--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel May 26, 2021 at 8:45 AM A wonderful triolet, Vijay, congratulations on your win:) love the "enamored line":) Vijay Pandit May 26, 2021 at 11:39 AM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Aniruddha Pathak May 26, 2021 at 6:40 AM Beautiful Triolet Vijay Pandit, and congrats for a well-deserving win, and yes, many thanks for wishing for my BD Vijay Pandit May 26, 2021 at 7:00 AM Delighted by your visit and comments--much appreciate--many thanks.

Kim Merryman May 25, 2021 at 8:08 PM Vijay, congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Vijay Pandit May 26, 2021 at 6:58 AM Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong May 25, 2021 at 12:59 PM I am back to congratulate you on your win for this lovely triolet Vijay. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit May 26, 2021 at 6:58 AM Much appreciate Connie--many thanks.

Sam Kauffman May 25, 2021 at 11:42 AM What a remarkable picture of lost love on "tiptoe!" I am always inspired by your word usage and crisp, creative images. Congratulations on your win. Vijay Pandit May 26, 2021 at 6:58 AM Glad you could visit with your kind remarks, Sam--much appreciate--many thanks.

Alexis Y. May 25, 2021 at 11:31 AM Hi Vijay, Your well-written triolet took me down memory lane. It caused me to revisit memories so long ago. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day my friend:-)Alexis Vijay Pandit May 26, 2021 at 6:57 AM Much appreciate, Alexis--many thanks.

Paula Goldsmith May 25, 2021 at 10:03 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful triolet write. Good memories are the best. Have a blessed day writing away................. Vijay Pandit May 26, 2021 at 6:57 AM Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose May 24, 2021 at 3:15 PM Sweet dreams are made of these, like the old song says, :) Vijay Pandit May 25, 2021 at 8:00 AM Much appreciate Vienna--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy May 24, 2021 at 10:03 AM Another beauty, Vijay--so moving and expressive. Janice Vijay Pandit May 24, 2021 at 10:13 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Akkina Downing May 24, 2021 at 5:26 AM WOW!! This is most beautiful and yeah one of the best! I love it, and a winner for me :) Vijay Pandit May 24, 2021 at 6:48 AM So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate, Akkina. Glad to see you again.

Edward Ibeh May 24, 2021 at 3:47 AM Superb triolet, Vijay:-) Definitely one of the best I've read for the contest. An obvious winner to me! Vijay Pandit May 24, 2021 at 6:48 AM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your voice of confidence.

Mike Gentile May 23, 2021 at 9:35 AM I've never tried this form Vijay but after seeing how beautiful yours is, I have been inspired ! Good Luck! Vijay Pandit May 23, 2021 at 12:25 PM Looking forward to reading yours soon Mike. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Sotto Poet May 23, 2021 at 7:52 AM How elegantly you expressed your deep reflections! Young love's beautiful sensation and lovely experiences, how enthralling the whole sensation is!   My very. Best  wishes for the contest Vijay Vijay Pandit May 23, 2021 at 12:24 PM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Lassad--many thanks for the kind remarks.

Joseph May May 22, 2021 at 8:26 PM I like the second line of the refrain, Very nicely penned Vijay Vijay Pandit May 23, 2021 at 12:24 PM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose May 22, 2021 at 5:11 PM Very well done Vijay, a winner in my circle of success poems, :) Vijay Pandit May 23, 2021 at 12:24 PM Much appreciate, Vienna--many thanks.

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