Michael Smith Poet Light Verse

Rejuvenating Rains

Feeling lost...
I close my eyes
And inhale
The rising storm

Gentle rhythm
Into drops
Freefalls upon acceptance
From quickened sky

Liquid softs 
Liquid grace
Crying tears
Caressing face

The thunder claps
Echoes an epiphany
As essence liberates

Alas
Spirit free
To fly at last

Rushing ways
Are souls being cleansed
Soaking up the cool...
Rejuvenating rains

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Connie Marcum Wong March 29, 2012 at 3:51 PM I can certainly relate to your poem Michael. I have a love of rain and am always thrilled when it begins raining. Here in the islands of course the rain is warm and refreshing.You have written a really wonderful poem that touches the soul. I have another called Crystal Rain, I posted some time ago. Thank you also for your nice comments and very nice to meet you. I will check out more of your poetry.

Wilma Neels July 18, 2011 at 10:51 AM Michael congratulations on this beauty in the contest ;-)

Elaine George July 18, 2011 at 10:49 AM Lovely Rhyme, Michael. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown July 18, 2011 at 9:52 AM Congratulations Michael, on your win in the contest of P.D. "Rain". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta July 17, 2011 at 9:03 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest, Michael

Michael J. Falotico July 17, 2011 at 7:42 AM Congrats my freind... such a good write.. Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 17, 2011 at 7:38 AM Congrats Michael on your HM in rain contest with this wonderful write and creativity luv..enjoy honor..

Poet Destroyer A July 17, 2011 at 2:40 AM Michael, Congratulations on your great Rain entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem about my favorite refreshing gift of life. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d