Regrets I Regret Regretting

Did you mention 'regrets'?

I have one or two, a few or possibly a million.
Depends on which way the wind is blowing,
and how gracious I'm feeling in the moment
Like, I'll never forgive that guy who butchered
my ideals of love everlasting,  that'll last a lifetime
nor, when he lied about my best friend, just
to prove a point about promiscuity, all false
Too many detours to recall, but past grievances
should remain midst poetry's recollections, 
not keep anyone awake at night, 
although in the brazen light of day, it'll come to me
on occasion, that nasty lawyer he snaked for
our divorce proceedings, nevertheless
I slept with him in our bed, admittedly no regrets
there, and if perchance you're reading, 
 he was a much better lover than you !


To Regret or Not to Regret - it's fiction....

For contest 'Regret', sponsor Frank Herrera

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/18/2017 10:59:00 AM
Ouch! You really know how to hit a fella w/a low blow, Paloma. Strong, truth-telling delivered here in this most guns blazing staccato style. Just riddling the mind w/mental bullets of pure fury. Remind me never to get on your bad side, dear. Love the poem though. A 7 for you. Love and more love to you.
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Date: 12/11/2016 9:57:00 AM
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Date: 10/18/2016 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine placement for this wonderfully written Prose, Paloma! Hugs, Sandra
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Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 4:55:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, much appreciated.
Date: 10/18/2016 12:11:00 AM
Ha! Love the little twist in a great write, Paloma, congrats on your second place win. Viv x
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Date: 10/19/2016 4:54:00 AM
Thanks so much Viv, sometimes you just gotta get silly. :)
Date: 10/17/2016 10:44:00 PM
A great one, Paloma. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/19/2016 4:54:00 AM
Thanks Afzal.
Date: 10/17/2016 5:51:00 PM
Very imaginative , like it ...
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Date: 10/17/2016 7:57:00 PM
Thanks Ian.
Date: 10/17/2016 3:05:00 PM
amazing Paloma! Congrats on your well deserved placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 10/17/2016 3:55:00 PM
Thanks so much luloo, I didn't realize, thought the contest was ongoing til November. :)
Date: 10/17/2016 1:37:00 PM
Love were you went with this..Very original take on sweet friend.
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Date: 10/17/2016 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine, tried a huge leap out of the box. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/17/2016 10:09:00 AM
Whoa, this one screams loudly. (That's me ducking behind some furniture) I can honestly say I don't regret reading this, I know better. : ) Good luck in the contest Paloma.
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Date: 10/17/2016 10:18:00 AM
Laughing here, be afraid, be very afraid Chris. :) Thanks so much, I always enjoy your comments.
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