Regrets

Regrets Antagonisms perceived Leave us aggrieved Hearts broken Tender spirits token Words miss-read Actions miss-lead Clamors in the night Pleading miss-sight Sides taken Lines shaken Blindness bodes Heavier loads Rashness steps Action’s regrets Unthinking eyes When misery cries Matters adrift Sieve and sift Love enduring Pardons ensuing Antagonisms perceived Leave us aggrieved Hearts broken Tender spirits token

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 3/15/2013 4:39:00 PM

Hi Debra, fun use of repetition and mirrored end and so true. Enjoyed this poem, too.

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/27/2013 3:48:00 PM

Relative relations, muddle low, fly with elation. You've put the soul on notice. The heart is glad for words like this. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2013 1:36:00 PM

Debra, beautifully described with sadness. - .... Feelings like "summer" is over ....... before it's begun. - Very well written!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/25/2013 11:41:00 AM

This is really a very well written write my friend! I enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What a masterful piece, Great Work!!

David Williams

Date: 2/25/2013 11:37:00 AM

Debra I like this and the format suits it very well....David

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/25/2013 11:05:00 AM

Unusual one Debra, but well written ...Seren