Regret

Regret….

I flew once in a field full of flowers,
a field that was kissed by April showers.
I tasted all the jasmines, as they were new,
I did bathe on a leaf in a little dew. 
I was always busy playing till midnight,
I woke up, and I was not sure of my sight.
I was a bird soaring as high as a hawk. 
Flying like a wind, with the wind, had a talk.
I turned into the wind and then to a cloud,
A dark cloud with the sound of thundering loud. 
I turned into the rain after being cloud,
quenching the deserts with silvery shroud.
I turned into river, and then to a sea,
even as water I was able to see.
I turned into a fish, perfectly aware,     
knowing that my lover was surely out there. 
Swimming like a fish, my world became cold,
I lost my will to live, and soon I got old.
I heard a nightingale calling me at night, 
telling me that being a man would be alright.
I turned into a man in search of wisdom, 
hoping that love and peace would rule the kingdom. 
A lot of years have passed with my broken heart, 
I could not find the peace; I needed a new start. 
I will change back again to look for my love;
maybe a lamb or sheep, maybe a white dove. 
I will look everywhere until it is found. 
I know it’s there for me if I look around. 
Until then, I’ll become laughter to a child, 
or maybe dandelions that grow wild.

2/19/2016 
Haloo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/10/2016 12:08:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend enjoyed from you. Loved always, bl
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/10/2016 11:10:00 PM
Thank you Bl, although I am not perfect, I am complete...
Date: 4/8/2016 11:41:00 PM
I can't remember falling in love with a piece so quickly. Right about the time you turned into a cloud, I was completely captivated. I had no idea where this piece was going and was presently surprised with every line. I wish it never ended. Fantastic piece. Thank you for sharing.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/9/2016 4:16:00 AM
Thanks Mike. I am a story teller searching for Love or God or both " Masnavi". Thanks for your wonderful remarks. You're always welcome.... Pashang
Date: 4/5/2016 12:27:00 PM
Nice imagery. A wonderful piece. I like it.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/5/2016 11:31:00 PM
Thanks Manmath for stopping by. You are so kind.
Date: 3/22/2016 11:58:00 AM
These were all very nice aspirations, Pashang.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/22/2016 2:22:00 PM
Thanks Lin
Date: 3/22/2016 11:11:00 AM
A great poem on regret. Don't regret though, for you can find true peace and love in God:} I really have:}
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/22/2016 2:23:00 PM
Good for you, I'm still looking
Date: 3/21/2016 9:06:00 PM
With age, the mind can see, down through the deepest roots of the tallest tree. You, Pashang, have a wonderful vision for seeing life. I enjoyed your writing. J.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/22/2016 1:01:00 AM
Thank you... If you seek it, you'll find. I'm still looking! Cheers.. Pashang
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